机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the mixer grinder. I use it daily to prepare my protein shakes because I go to the gym regularly. It helps me make my drinks quickly and easily.

建議: Your answer has some grammar and vocabulary errors, and the ideas are not clearly expressed. Try to use correct terms (e.g., 'sweeping machine' instead of 'shipping machine') and provide specific reasons with linking words to make your answer clearer and more natural.

範例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important. They save a lot of time and effort in daily chores, making life easier and less tiring for people.

建議: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid contradictions. Use simple sentences and linking words to explain why reading instructions is helpful.

範例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine. This helps me understand how the machine works and how to use it safely. However, sometimes I forget to read them.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts and use correct grammar. Also, use linking words to explain why reading instructions is important.

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read instructions before using any machine because each machine works differently. Reading instructions helps us understand how to operate the machine properly and avoid mistakes.

× I would like to say that mixer grinder which I often used for preparing my daily dose of protein drink and I use mixer grinder in a regular basis because I always go to gym so I need to prepare my drink.

✓ I would like to say that the mixer grinder which I often use for preparing my daily dose of protein drink and I use the mixer grinder on a regular basis because I always go to the gym so I need to prepare my drink.

The verb 'used' should be in present tense 'use' to match the habitual action. Also, 'in a regular basis' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on a regular basis'. Additionally, articles 'the' are needed before 'mixer grinder' and 'gym' for specificity.

× I would like to say that mixer grinder which I often used for preparing my daily dose of protein drink and I use mixer grinder in a regular basis because I always go to gym so I need to prepare my drink.

✓ I would like to say that the mixer grinder which I often use for preparing my daily dose of protein drink and I use the mixer grinder on a regular basis because I always go to the gym so I need to prepare my drink.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'mixer grinder' and 'gym' to specify particular items or places.

× Yes, I think washing machine and shipping machine are important because washing machine and sweeping machines are the most used machines in your daily life, which help humans to reduce their amount of work and make them more easier to live and get their workload degrees.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because washing machines and sweeping machines are the most used machines in daily life, which help humans reduce their amount of work and make life easier and reduce their workload.

Plural forms 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines' are needed to match the context. The article 'the' before 'most used machines' is optional but can be omitted here. 'More easier' is incorrect; 'easier' alone suffices. 'Get their workload degrees' is unclear and corrected to 'reduce their workload' for clarity.

× Yes, I think washing machine and shipping machine are important because washing machine and sweeping machines are the most used machines in your daily life, which help humans to reduce their amount of work and make them more easier to live and get their workload degrees.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because washing machines and sweeping machines are the most used machines in daily life, which help humans reduce their amount of work and make life easier and reduce their workload.

The singular 'washing machine' and 'shipping machine' should be plural 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines' to agree with the plural subject and context.

× I use mixer grinder in a regular basis because I always go to gym so I need to prepare my drink.

✓ I use the mixer grinder on a regular basis because I always go to the gym so I need to prepare my drink.

'In a regular basis' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on a regular basis'. Also, 'go to gym' requires the definite article 'the' before 'gym'.

× Yes, I often read the instruction before using a machine because I think that or consider that creating the user manual or instructions of a machine gives us a better understanding of how does the machine work and what all do we need to consider well while using that machine.

✓ Yes, I often read the instructions before using a machine because I think that creating the user manual or instructions of a machine gives us a better understanding of how the machine works and what we need to consider while using that machine.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as manuals usually have multiple instructions. The phrase 'how does the machine work' is incorrect in indirect speech; it should be 'how the machine works'. Also, 'what all do we need to consider well' is awkward and corrected to 'what we need to consider' for clarity.

× Yes, I often read the instruction before using a machine because I think that or consider that creating the user manual or instructions of a machine gives us a better understanding of how does the machine work and what all do we need to consider well while using that machine.

✓ Yes, I often read the instructions before using a machine because I think that creating the user manual or instructions of a machine gives us a better understanding of how the machine works and what we need to consider while using that machine.

'The instruction' should be 'the instructions' as it refers to multiple steps. Also, 'the machine' is correct here as it refers to a specific machine being used.

× So I also often get forgot to read.

✓ So I also often forget to read.

'Get forgot' is incorrect; the correct verb form is 'forget'. The phrase 'get forgot' is not standard English.

× Yes, I think it's significant for a person to read the instruction before using any kind of any kind of machines because every machines are built different and the working of it is would be different from the others.

✓ Yes, I think it's significant for a person to read the instructions before using any kind of machines because every machine is built differently and its working would be different from others.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Any kind of any kind of machines' is repetitive; one 'any kind of machines' suffices. 'Every machines' is incorrect; 'every' requires singular noun 'machine'. 'Built different' should be 'built differently' (adverb). 'The working of it is would be' is incorrect; corrected to 'its working would be'.

× Yes, I think it's significant for a person to read the instruction before using any kind of any kind of machines because every machines are built different and the working of it is would be different from the others.

✓ Yes, I think it's significant for a person to read the instructions before using any kind of machines because every machine is built differently and its working would be different from others.

'Every' requires singular noun 'machine' not plural 'machines'. Also, 'instructions' should be plural.

× Yes, I think it's significant for a person to read the instruction before using any kind of any kind of machines because every machines are built different and the working of it is would be different from the others.

✓ Yes, I think it's significant for a person to read the instructions before using any kind of machines because every machine is built differently and its working would be different from others.

'Built different' is incorrect; the adverb 'differently' should be used to modify the verb 'built'.

× So reading instruction can give them a better understanding of.

✓ So reading instructions can give them a better understanding.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'of'. It should end after 'understanding' or specify what understanding of, but here it is better to end the sentence properly.