机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达方式。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the coffee machine because I use it every morning to help me wake up and start my day.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，并提供更具体的例子。

範例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because modern technology has added many useful functions, such as washing delicate wool clothes.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议注意单复数形式，句子结构要完整，并且表达要更流畅。

範例: I usually read the instructions before using a machine. For example, when I bought a new washing machine with many functions, I carefully read the manual to understand how to use it.

建議: 回答不完整且重复使用填充词，表达不清晰。建议避免使用“you know”等口语填充词，完整表达观点并举具体例子。

範例: Yes, it is important to read instructions because new machines often have additional functions. For instance, some washing machines can wash delicate fabrics or even sanitize clothes.

× Well, let me think that must be the coffee machines.

✓ Well, let me think that must be the coffee machine.

这里的主语是单数形式的"that"，所以后面的名词"coffee machine"也应该用单数形式。复数形式"machines"与主语不一致，导致数的一致性错误。

× Every single day I have to use a cup of coffee to wake me up and, you know, get us, get start a new day.

✓ Every single day I have to use a cup of coffee to wake me up and, you know, get started a new day.

短语"get start a new day"中，"start"应使用过去分词形式"started"，构成固定短语"get started"，表示开始。

× Oh yes, as a technology improved, the washing machines and the sweeping machines have more and more functions that you can't imagine before.

✓ Oh yes, as technology has improved, the washing machines and the sweeping machines have more and more functions that you couldn't imagine before.

"a technology"应改为不可数名词"technology"，且时态应为现在完成时"has improved"，表示技术的进步。"can't imagine before"时态不对，应为过去时"couldn't imagine before"，表示过去无法想象。

× Well, I will now read the instructions before, but just about four months ago I bought a new washing machines with a lot of new functions that I cannot handle well.

✓ Well, I will now read the instructions before, but just about four months ago I bought a new washing machine with a lot of new functions that I cannot handle well.

"washing machines"应为单数形式"washing machine"，因为指的是一台新买的洗衣机。

× I can just read the instruction carefully and know how to use them.

✓ I can just read the instructions carefully and know how to use them.

"instruction"应为复数形式"instructions"，因为通常说明书是多条指令的集合。

× For example, we both know that the washing machines is designed to wash clothes, but the new products may have some, you know, other functions like, you know, washing the.

✓ For example, we both know that the washing machine is designed to wash clothes, but the new products may have some, you know, other functions like, you know, washing the.

"washing machines is"主谓不一致，应改为单数形式"washing machine is"，因为指的是洗衣机这一类单数概念。