机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ý chính rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, cụm từ "I cannot live without it, I bank on it" hơi lặp ý và không tự nhiên. Bạn nên dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

範例: My favourite machine at home is my laptop because I use it frequently for studying. It is essential for me as it helps me access information and complete assignments efficiently.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ quan điểm của bạn.

範例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and effort, allowing people to focus on more important tasks.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng, làm giảm tính hiệu quả và tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và thêm chi tiết để làm rõ ý.

範例: I usually read the instructions when I use a machine for the first time or if it seems complicated. Otherwise, I don't read them if the machine is easy to use.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời có phần lặp từ và cấu trúc chưa mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn và tránh lặp ý.

範例: Yes, I believe reading instructions is important because it helps us use devices correctly, which can extend their lifespan and ensure they work efficiently for a longer time.

× You think them reduces number the amount of time I have to spend on how how it works and make more time for important things?

✓ Do you think they reduce the amount of time I have to spend on how it works and make more time for important things?

The pronoun 'them' is incorrectly used; it should be 'they' as the subject of the verb. Also, 'reduces' should be 'reduce' to agree with the plural subject 'they'. The phrase 'number the amount of time' is incorrect; 'the amount of time' is correct. The sentence structure is also corrected to form a proper question.

× Mostly sometime when it is too easy to use or commonplace I want.

✓ Mostly sometimes, when it is too easy to use or commonplace, I don't want to.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Mostly sometime' should be 'Mostly sometimes' or 'Sometimes'. The phrase 'I want' is unclear and likely incorrect in this context. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning that the student usually does not want to read instructions when the machine is easy to use or common.

× But if I buy it the first time or I never use it before I I of course I will try to read instructions to.

✓ But if I buy it for the first time or have never used it before, I will of course try to read the instructions.

The sentence has repeated words ('I I') and incorrect tense usage ('never use' should be 'have never used'). The phrase 'read instructions to' is incorrect; it should be 'read the instructions'. The corrected sentence uses proper tense and structure.

× Yes, I think reading instructions helps us to do it properly.

✓ Yes, I think reading instructions helps me to do it properly.

The pronoun 'us' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to their own action. 'Me' is the correct pronoun to indicate the speaker themselves.

× And by using devices properly you can lengthen its life expectancy and use more for a long time for a more long time.

✓ And by using devices properly, you can lengthen their life expectancy and use them for a longer time.

The phrase 'use more for a long time for a more long time' is redundant and incorrect. 'Use them for a longer time' is the correct expression. Also, 'its' should be 'their' to agree with the plural noun 'devices'.