机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达有误，且句子过于零散。建议练习完整句子表达，避免断断续续，使用连词使回答更流畅。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it helps me stay cool during the hot summer months. I use it every day to keep my room comfortable and refreshing.

建議: 回答内容较好，但语法错误较多，句子结构不完整。建议注意时态和语法，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Of course, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they do housework more efficiently than people. Moreover, they save a lot of time and are easy to use, which makes my life more convenient.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，句子断裂且语法错误多。建议练习完整句子表达，注意词汇搭配和语法，避免断句。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I don't understand them well. Reading the instructions helps me use the machines correctly and avoid damaging them.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和句子不完整的问题。建议加强语法练习，使用完整句子和适当连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because machines are complex nowadays. By reading carefully, we can use them more easily and also know how to fix them when they break down.

× Well, I love the air condition in my. Room. Best.

✓ Well, I love the air conditioner in my room best.

这里'air condition'应为'air conditioner'，因为指的是具体的设备，且'room'前不需要大写。'Best'应放在句尾修饰整个句子。

× So I have to turn on it every time to make sure my room is cool enough so that I won't.

✓ So I have to turn it on every time to make sure my room is cool enough so that I won't be hot.

'turn on it'的正确顺序是'turn it on'。句尾不完整，补充完整表达。

× Of course, because they can do the housework more efficient than people.

✓ Of course, because they can do the housework more efficiently than people.

'more efficient'应使用副词形式'more efficiently'来修饰动词'do'。

× And they are easy to use that. Make my life more convenient.

✓ And they are easy to use, which makes my life more convenient.

原句结构不完整，需用关系代词'which'连接两个句子，使句子完整通顺。

× Of course, because I always have poor understanding. About machine.

✓ Of course, because I always have poor understanding about machines.

'machine'应为复数形式'machines'，且'understanding about'不应断句。

× So I have to read the instruction so that I can use them easier.

✓ So I have to read the instructions so that I can use them more easily.

'instruction'应为复数形式'instructions'，'easier'应改为副词形式'more easily'修饰动词'use'。

× Or I may do something wrong or broken. Box them.

✓ Or I may do something wrong or break them.

原句结构混乱，'broken'应改为动词形式'break'，'Box them'无意义，应删除。

× Yes, because nowadays all of the machine are complex, so.

✓ Yes, because nowadays all of the machines are complex, so.

'machine'应为复数形式'machines'，表示所有机器。

× We should carefully read so that we can use them more easier.

✓ We should read carefully so that we can use them more easily.

'carefully'应放在动词后，'more easier'是错误的比较级，应为'more easily'。

× And when they are broken, we can read the instruction to know how to restore them or how to.

✓ And when they are broken, we can read the instructions to know how to repair them or how to use them.

句子不完整，补充完整表达，'instruction'应为复数形式'instructions'，'restore'改为更合适的'repair'。