机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达清晰且内容相关，但有些重复（如“Celsius degrees Celsius”重复表达温度单位），可以简化语言使表达更自然。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it helps me stay cool during the hot summer, especially when temperatures reach nearly 40 degrees Celsius.

建議: 回答中“doing trails”表达不准确，应使用更合适的词汇；此外，句子较长且缺少连接词，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: To be honest, I don't think washing and sweeping machines are important for me because I prefer doing chores myself. Moreover, not using machines saves money and keeps me active, which is good for my health.

建議: 回答内容完整，但句子结构稍显重复，建议使用连接词和更自然的表达方式。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it properly and avoid mistakes.

建議: 回答表达清楚，但“breakdown”应为“break down”，且句子可更简洁自然。

範例: Yes, reading instructions is very important because if we don't, we might operate the machine incorrectly, which could cause it to break down or even be dangerous.

× I can't imagine living without it, especially when the temperature reaches almost 40 Celsius degrees Celsius.

✓ I can't imagine living without it, especially when the temperature reaches almost 40 degrees Celsius.

“Celsius degrees Celsius”中“Celsius”重复使用，正确表达应为“degrees Celsius”，即“摄氏度”。

× I prefer doing trails by myself and not using machines can not only save money but also keep me active, which is beneficial for my health.

✓ I prefer doing chores by myself, and not using machines can not only save money but also keep me active, which is beneficial for my health.

“doing trails”用词不当，应为“doing chores”（做家务）更符合语境。

× Yes, I always read instructions before I use machines because after reading it I can understand how to operate machines appropriately and avoid making mistakes during operation.

✓ Yes, I always read instructions before I use machines because after reading them I can understand how to operate machines appropriately and avoid making mistakes during operation.

“instructions”是复数，指代时应使用复数代词“them”，而非单数“it”。

× Yes, it is very important to read instructions because if we don't we may operate machine incorrectly and it may cause the machine to breakdown or even put us in danger.

✓ Yes, it is very important to read instructions because if we don't we may operate the machine incorrectly and it may cause the machine to break down or even put us in danger.

“operate machine”缺少定冠词“the”，应为“operate the machine”。“breakdown”作为名词使用时正确，作为动词短语应分开写为“break down”。