机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“motion”应为“machine”，句子未完整表达意思。建议注意词汇准确性，避免句子不完整，回答时保持自然流畅，避免重复。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner. I use it almost every day because the weather in Taiwan has been very hot recently. It helps me sleep better at night, and without it, I find it hard to rest.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议回答时避免重复，使用连贯的句子，并且提供更具体的理由支持观点。

範例: I think washing machines are very important because they save a lot of time and effort. However, I am not sure about sweeping machines since we don't have one at home, and the dry weather means dust is less of a problem.

建議: 回答较好，但有些句子重复且表达不够简洁。建议减少重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并且逻辑更清晰。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they often have different functions. If I assume I understand but actually don't, it can lead to mistakes. So I prefer to check the brochure carefully first.

建議: 回答不完整且语句重复，表达不清晰。建议回答时保持句子完整，避免重复，明确表达观点，并使用恰当的连接词使回答更连贯。

範例: I think it depends on the type of instructions. For example, contracts provide important information that helps you understand the next steps, but sometimes they are too long and hard to read.

× My favorite motion is the air conditioner.

✓ My favorite machine is the air conditioner.

这里'motion'用错了，应该用'machine'表示机器。motion是动作的意思，不符合语境。

× I nearly use it every day because recently the weather in Taiwan is too hot and therefore I need to turn it on while I sleep.

✓ I nearly use it every day because recently the weather in Taiwan has been too hot and therefore I need to turn it on while I sleep.

这里时态需要用现在完成进行时表示最近一段时间的持续状态。

× So I think it is a very.

✓ So I think it is very useful.

句子不完整，缺少形容词或补语，导致表达不清楚。

× I doubt about the importance of sweeping machine because I need I I don't remember we have a sweeping machine at home and the weather is quite dry.

✓ I doubt the importance of the sweeping machine because I don't remember we have a sweeping machine at home and the weather is quite dry.

sweeping machine前缺少定冠词the，且'doubt about'用法错误，正确用法是'doubt'后直接接宾语。

× If I think that I understand it, but turns out I don't, then it will be it will be hilarious.

✓ If I think that I understand it, but it turns out I don't, then it will be hilarious.

缺少主语it，导致句子结构不完整。

× So therefore I always check the information given on the brochure before I use it.

✓ So therefore I always check the information given in the brochure before I use it.

介词用错，应该用'in the brochure'表示在手册中。

× Well, I, I think that it depends on what kind of instructions are they.

✓ Well, I think that it depends on what kind of instructions they are.

疑问句语序错误，陈述句中应为主语+谓语结构。

× ...and so that you, you can get the informations to, to move on to the next step...

✓ ...and so that you can get the information to move on to the next step...

information是不可数名词，不能加复数-s。

× but but those contacts are too long, so.

✓ But those contracts are too long, so...

重复单词且contacts拼写错误，应为contracts，句子未完成。