机器— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
What is your favourite machine in your home?
考生
Well, in my home, I think my favorite machine would be my coffee maker because I'm a coffee person and I like drinking coffee in the morning as my daily routine. So yeah, I adore my coffee machine. I can't live without it.
考官
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
考生
Of course, these days people tend to be lazy after work, so having those machines in their house is definitely helpful for them to relax and be more comfortable. For me, I like to have those machines in my home so they can do things for me they can do chores for me with.
考官
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
考生
I'm actually not. I tend to use machines 1st and then go to the instructions if I have any doubts about how to using it. How to use it because I'm more of a practical person than a typical robot like person.
考官
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
考生
Well, I think that depends on how hard this machine it is. This machine, this machine is to be used for me. I tend to try it on 1st and then go to the instructions if I have if I count on any difficult difficulty.
評估
總分
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答较为自然且表达了个人喜好，但句子结构较为简单，且部分表达略显重复。建议使用更多连接词丰富句子结构，避免重复表达。
範例: My favourite machine at home is definitely my coffee maker because I enjoy starting my day with a fresh cup of coffee. It has become an essential part of my morning routine, and I really can't imagine living without it.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答内容较为口语化且有语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用恰当的连接词使表达更连贯。
範例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help save time and effort. After a long day at work, these machines allow people to relax while the chores are done automatically.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且句子结构较为混乱。建议使用更规范的语法，简洁明了地表达观点。
範例: Usually, I don't read the instructions before using a machine. I prefer to try it first and only read the manual if I encounter any problems because I like learning by doing.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答表达不够清晰，存在重复和语法错误。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
範例: I think it depends on how complicated the machine is. For simple devices, I usually try them first, but if I find it difficult, I will read the instructions to understand how to use it properly.
文法
× I tend to use machines 1st and then go to the instructions if I have any doubts about how to using it.
✓ I tend to use machines first and then go to the instructions if I have any doubts about how to use it.
动词后面接动名词（-ing形式）时，通常是作为名词使用，但在这里“how to”后面应该接动词原形，表示“如何使用”，所以应改为“how to use”。
× Well, I think that depends on how hard this machine it is.
✓ Well, I think that depends on how hard this machine is.
句子中“this machine it is”结构重复，造成语法错误，应去掉多余的“it”，保持主谓一致。
× This machine, this machine is to be used for me.
✓ This machine is to be used by me.
表达“被我使用”时，应使用被动语态“be used by me”，而不是“is to be used for me”，后者表达不准确。
× I tend to try it on 1st and then go to the instructions if I have if I count on any difficult difficulty.
✓ I tend to try it first and then go to the instructions if I encounter any difficulty.
“count on any difficult difficulty”表达错误，应为“encounter any difficulty”，表示“遇到任何困难”。此外，“1st”应写为“first”。
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