机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但表达略显重复，且句子结构简单。建议避免重复表达相同意思，尝试使用更多连接词使回答更连贯。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. Washing clothes by hand is quite tiring and time-consuming, so this machine really helps me a lot.

建議: 回答不够完整且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议回答时注意句子完整，避免重复和语法错误，并且提供具体理由支持观点。

範例: Yes, I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help save time and make household chores easier. Even though we don't have a sweeping machine at home, I believe it would be useful.

建議: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺乏连贯性。建议回答时保持句子完整，逻辑清晰，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: It depends on the machine. For small and simple devices like a juicer, I usually don't read the instructions. However, for more complex machines, I always read the manual carefully before using them.

建議: 回答内容有一定相关性，但表达不完整且有语法错误。建议回答时注意句子完整，避免语法错误，并提供具体例子支持观点。

範例: Yes, I think reading instructions is very important, especially for complicated machines. For instance, I once damaged a part of our washing machine because I didn't read the manual before using it.

× I say the washing machine because it really saved my time and my energy about washing clothes.

✓ I say the washing machine because it really saves my time and my energy when washing clothes.

这里的时态应该是现在时，因为学生在描述一般事实或习惯。'saved'是过去时，应该改为现在时'saves'。另外，'about washing clothes'表达不自然，改为'when washing clothes'更合适。

× Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

✓ Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

该句无语法错误，复数形式使用正确。

× Although we don't have a sweeping machine at home because my parents thought that was useless.

✓ Although we don't have a sweeping machine at home because my parents thought it was useless.

这里的'was'指代前面的'sweeping machine'，用'it'更合适，避免重复名词。

× But from my point from to my mind the sweeping machines can also.

✓ But from my point of view, sweeping machines can also be useful.

原句结构混乱，'from my point from to my mind'是不正确的表达，应改为'from my point of view'。句子缺少谓语，补充完整。

× Well, it depends on what kind of instructions it it is.

✓ Well, it depends on what kind of instructions it is.

'it it'重复，应去掉一个。

× You know like the small ones like the juicer or something. Look, look looks small or easy.

✓ You know, like the small ones, like the juicer or something. It looks small or easy.

'look, look looks'重复且不正确，改为'It looks'更合适。

× I won't use their brochures, but if it's a.

✓ I won't use their brochures if it's a small or simple machine.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，补充完整使句意明确。

× Of course is really significant, especially for those complicated ones.

✓ Of course, it is really significant, especially for those complicated ones.

缺少主语'it'，应补充完整。

× I haven't read it before I use it, so I have a small bracket broke it, but my dad.

✓ I hadn't read it before I used it, so a small bracket broke, but my dad helped.

时态不一致，'haven't read'应改为过去完成时'hadn't read'，'use'改为过去时'used'。'have a small bracket broke it'表达不清，改为'a small bracket broke'。句子不完整，补充'my dad helped'使句意完整。