机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "provide" instead of "provides" and "surfing in the Internet" instead of "surfing the Internet." Try to use correct verb forms and more natural expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas more smoothly.

範例: My favourite machine at home is my tablet because it helps me complete my online exercises every day. Additionally, it provides a convenient way for me to study and surf the Internet, making it very useful.

建議: Your answer shows your opinion clearly but has grammatical mistakes and some repetition, such as "help me to doing" and "clean and clean the clothes." Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same word unnecessarily. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: Absolutely yes, because I am not good at washing clothes or doing housework. These machines help me clean both my clothes and home efficiently, and they save me a lot of time.

建議: Your answer is understandable but quite long and contains some grammatical errors, such as "did not know" (should be "do not know" for present habit) and awkward phrasing. Try to make your sentences shorter and clearer, and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because I do not know how to operate it. The instructions provide useful information on washing or drying clothes, which helps me finish my housework quickly.

建議: Your answer has some unclear expressions and grammatical errors, such as "provide" instead of "provides" and "physically and typically useful" which is confusing. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. Also, explain your opinion with clearer reasons and examples.

範例: Actually, I think it is not always necessary to read the instructions because we can watch YouTube videos that show how to use machines. These videos provide both voice and visuals, which are often more helpful, especially since some machines do not come with instructions.

× It also provide an approach for me to study and surfing in the Internet, so I think it is useful and convenient.

✓ It also provides an approach for me to study and surf on the Internet, so I think it is useful and convenient.

The verb 'provide' should be in the third person singular form 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, 'surfing' should be changed to the base form 'surf' after 'to' which requires the base verb form. Additionally, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to the Internet.

× It also provide an approach for me to study and surfing in the Internet, so I think it is useful and convenient.

✓ It also provides an approach for me to study and surf on the Internet, so I think it is useful and convenient.

The verb 'provide' must be in the third person singular form 'provides' to match the singular subject 'It'.

× These machines help me to doing the housework, clean and clean the clothes as well and it also is convenient and help me to save my time on finishing.

✓ These machines help me to do the housework, clean the clothes as well, and they are also convenient and help me save time finishing.

After 'help me to', the verb should be in base form 'do' not 'doing'. Also, 'clean and clean the clothes' is repetitive; it should be 'clean the clothes'. The phrase 'help me to save my time on finishing' is awkward; better to say 'help me save time finishing'. 'It also is' should be 'they are also' to agree with plural subject 'machines'.

× These machines help me to doing the housework, clean and clean the clothes as well and it also is convenient and help me to save my time on finishing.

✓ These machines help me to do the housework, clean the clothes as well, and they are also convenient and help me save time finishing.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect here because the subject is plural 'machines'. The correct pronoun is 'they' to agree with plural subject.

× Absolutely yes, because I did not know how to control the washing machine and I have to read the instructions so they can give me the information about how to wash or dry my clothes and it helps me to finish my housework as soon as possible, so I think it is useful.

✓ Absolutely yes, because I did not know how to control the washing machine and I had to read the instructions so they could give me the information about how to wash or dry my clothes and it helps me finish my housework as soon as possible, so I think it is useful.

The phrase 'I have to read' should be in past tense 'I had to read' to match the past context. Also, 'they can give' should be 'they could give' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Actually no, because we can find the instructions in the YouTube video and it also provide the voice and video for us to follow the instruction.

✓ Actually no, because we can find the instructions in the YouTube videos and it also provides voice and video for us to follow the instructions.

'YouTube video' should be plural 'YouTube videos' as instructions are usually in multiple videos. 'Provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'The voice and video' should be 'voice and video' without 'the'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' to match context.

× Actually no, because we can find the instructions in the YouTube video and it also provide the voice and video for us to follow the instruction.

✓ Actually no, because we can find the instructions in the YouTube videos and it also provides voice and video for us to follow the instructions.

The verb 'provide' must be in third person singular form 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× It is physically and typically useful than the instruction also and some machines do not have.

✓ It is more practical and typical than the instructions, and some machines do not have them.

'Physically and typically useful' is awkward; 'more practical and typical' is clearer. 'Than the instruction also' is incorrect; it should be 'than the instructions'. The last part 'and some machines do not have' is incomplete; adding 'them' clarifies the meaning.