机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to complete your sentences fully and avoid missing words to make your answer clearer and more natural. Also, add a bit more detail about why you like the air fryer to enrich your response.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the air fryer because it cooks food quickly and healthily. For example, I can prepare crispy fries without using much oil, which saves time and is better for my health.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve coherence by using linking words and providing more specific examples to support your opinion.

範例: Yes, definitely. Washing machines and sweeping machines are essential in our daily lives because they help us maintain cleanliness. For instance, washing machines clean our clothes efficiently, while sweeping machines keep our homes tidy and free from dust.

建議: Focus on using correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and try to express your ideas more naturally and logically.

範例: I usually read the instructions before using any new machine to understand how it works. However, I recently bought a dryer and haven't had time to read its manual yet, which is the only exception.

建議: Improve your sentence clarity by correcting grammar and word choice. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more concise.

範例: Yes, it is very important to read the instructions before using new machines because the manual provides detailed information on how to operate and maintain them properly.

× The air fryer, which ***** food faster and prepares everything in a short time.

✓ The air fryer, which cooks food faster and prepares everything in a short time.

The original sentence uses '*****' which is not a verb form. The correct verb 'cooks' should be used to describe the air fryer's action. Using the correct present tense verb clarifies the meaning and fits the context.

× I usually read the instructions before using any new machine but it will covered.

✓ I usually read the instructions before using any new machine but it will be covered.

The phrase 'it will covered' is missing the auxiliary verb 'be' to form the future passive voice. The correct form is 'will be covered' to indicate that something will be covered in the future.

× I bought a new machine which was dryer and I did not have time to read the manual of it.

✓ I bought a new machine which was a dryer and I did not have time to read its manual.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'dryer' and uses 'manual of it' which is awkward. Adding 'a' before 'dryer' and replacing 'manual of it' with 'its manual' improves grammatical correctness and naturalness.

× Yes, it is very important to read the instructions before we play a news the new machines because the manual has all the written details regarding how to use the new machine and also about the maintenance of it.

✓ Yes, it is very important to read the instructions before we use the new machines because the manual has all the written details regarding how to use the new machine and also about its maintenance.

The phrase 'before we play a news the new machines' is incorrect. 'Play a news' is not appropriate here; it should be 'use the new machines'. Also, 'maintenance of it' is better expressed as 'its maintenance' for clarity and correctness.