机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“it do not need”应为“it does not need”，以及“refresh our hands”表达不清晰。建议注意主谓一致，使用更准确的表达，并避免冗余。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine, which my mom bought when we moved to our new house. It makes our daily life more convenient by cleaning clothes efficiently. Moreover, it is easy to use because you just need to press a button, and it adjusts the wash cycle based on different fabric types.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“makes”应为“make”，“decrease”应为“decrease”。建议注意动词形式的一致性，并且可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I believe that washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they make our daily life more convenient and help reduce the burden of housework.

建議: 回答较为清晰，但最后一句缺少主语，且表达不完整。建议完整表达句子，并使用连接词使内容更连贯。

範例: Of course, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they provide guidance on how to use it correctly and safely. They also include important details on what to do if the machine breaks down.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“keep us away from dangerous”应为“keep us away from danger”。建议注意词汇搭配和句子结构的准确性。

範例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions carefully because they help us use the machine correctly and keep us safe from danger.

× It brings us daily life, convenience and refresh our hands.

✓ It brings us daily life convenience and refreshes our hands.

主语是单数的"It"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"refreshes"，而不是原形"refresh"。

× By the way, it do not need too much effort to learn how to use it, just press the button and it clean the clothes according to different fabrics.

✓ By the way, it does not need too much effort to learn how to use it, just press the button and it cleans the clothes according to different fabrics.

主语"it"是第三人称单数，助动词应为"does"而非"do"，动词"clean"应加-s变为"cleans"以符合主谓一致。

× such innovations makes our daily life convenient and decrease the burden of doing housework.

✓ such innovations make our daily life convenient and decrease the burden of doing housework.

主语"innovations"是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式"make"，而不是单数"makes"。

× Also give some special details about how to deal when machine breaks down.

✓ They also give some special details about how to deal when the machine breaks down.

句子缺少主语，需加上"They"作为主语；"machine"前应加定冠词"the"。

× Reading it carefully can not only make us use it correctly, but also keep us away from dangerous.

✓ Reading it carefully can not only make us use it correctly, but also keep us away from danger.

"dangerous"是形容词，句中应使用名词"danger"表示"危险"。