机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，建议简化句子并注意时态和语法的正确使用，同时避免重复表达。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the fridge. Since it's summer, I like to keep my drinks cold. I also store facial masks in the fridge because they feel refreshing when cool.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的句子结构，并且避免重复表达，增强逻辑连贯性。

範例: I think washing machines are important, especially in winter because the water is very cold. However, sweeping machines are not essential for me since I can sweep the floor myself.

建議: 表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简化表达，明确说明自己的习惯，并避免重复和语法错误。

範例: No, I usually don't read the instructions. I prefer to choose machines that I can handle. If I don't understand, I look for instructions or videos on the Internet.

建議: 回答较为清晰，但有重复和语法问题，建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: I don't think it's always necessary to read instructions if you are familiar with the machine. However, if you don't know how to use it, reading the instructions is important.

× Maybe the fridge you know now is the summer and I need to have some ice drink.

✓ Maybe the fridge, you know, now is summer and I need to have some ice drinks.

这里“ice drink”应使用复数形式“ice drinks”，因为表示不止一杯冰饮料，符合复数规则。

× So I need my fridge very much and also I need do some masks, the facial masks.

✓ So I need my fridge very much and also I need to do some masks, the facial masks.

“do some masks”中的“masks”应为复数形式，表示多张面膜。

× I also put it in my fridge and it feels so cool.

✓ I also put them in my fridge and they feel so cool.

“masks”是复数，代词应使用复数“them”，谓语动词也应用复数形式“feel”。

× I think washing machines is important in winter, you know, the water is so cold, so you will feel uncomfortable if you wash that by hand.

✓ I think washing machines are important in winter, you know, the water is so cold, so you will feel uncomfortable if you wash clothes by hand.

“washing machines”是复数，谓语动词应用复数“are”。“wash that”不明确，改为“wash clothes”更准确。

× And sweeping machines is not so necessary in my day life, so I can do.

✓ And sweeping machines are not so necessary in my daily life, so I can do it myself.

“sweeping machines”是复数，谓语动词应用复数“are”。“day life”应为“daily life”。

× I will choose the Internet to see the instructions by, by the people in Internet, Yeah.

✓ I will choose the Internet to see the instructions by the people on the Internet, yeah.

介词“in Internet”应改为“on the Internet”，表示在互联网上。

× If you're familiar with the machines you need to you need to work with, you don't need to read the instructions.

✓ If you're familiar with the machines you need to work with, you don't need to read the instructions.

句中“you need to”重复，应删除多余部分，使句子更通顺。