机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear expressions, such as "It consider Moon for me." To improve, focus on clear and correct sentence structures, avoid redundancy, and explain your ideas more precisely. For example, replace unclear phrases with clear descriptions and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: My favourite machine at home is my mobile phone because I use it for many purposes, such as communicating, browsing the internet, and managing my schedule. It makes my life much easier and more organized.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like "washing machine sensing machines" and "buy machines work done very perfectly." To improve, use correct grammar, clarify your points, and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time compared to doing these tasks manually. Moreover, they help people complete household chores more efficiently, which is a positive development.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use complete sentences with correct grammar and add linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they help me understand how to use it properly and safely. This way, I can avoid mistakes and learn more about the machine's features.

建議: Your answer is clear but has some grammatical errors and could be more concise. To improve, use correct grammar, avoid repetition, and connect your ideas with linking words for better flow.

範例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because if people don't, they might use the machine incorrectly, which can cause damage or even be dangerous. Therefore, reading instructions first helps ensure safe and proper use.

× It makes my life more easier.

✓ It makes my life easier.

The word 'easier' is already a comparative adjective, so adding 'more' before it is redundant and incorrect. Use either 'easier' or 'more easy' (less common), but not 'more easier'. Here, 'easier' alone is correct.

× It consider Moon for me.

✓ It is like the moon to me.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Consider' requires a subject and object, and 'Moon' should be preceded by an article and used in a simile or metaphor properly. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning using a simile.

× I think the washing machine sensing machines are very important because it take less time as compared to manually.

✓ I think the washing machine and sweeping machines are very important because they take less time compared to doing it manually.

The subject 'washing machine and sweeping machines' is plural, so the verb should be 'take' not 'take'. Also, 'it' should be 'they' to agree with the plural subject. The phrase 'as compared to manually' is awkward; 'compared to doing it manually' is clearer.

× So people can save their time and buy machines work done very perfectly.

✓ So people can save their time and have machines do the work very perfectly.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Buy machines work done' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses 'have machines do the work' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, I read instructions so while using the machines because every machine they provided instructions and it is good to use it perfectly and learn more and more things about it.

✓ Yes, I read instructions while using the machines because every machine provides instructions, and it is good to use them properly and learn more about them.

The original sentence misuses pronouns 'they' and 'it' confusingly. 'Every machine' is singular, so 'provides' is correct. 'Instructions' is plural, so 'them' should be used instead of 'it'. Also, 'so while using' is awkward; 'while using' is sufficient.

× I think that is very important to read instruction because sometime people do not read instruction and try to run the machines first time.

✓ I think it is very important to read instructions because sometimes people do not read instructions and try to use the machines for the first time.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' when referring to general guidelines. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Try to run the machines first time' is awkward; 'try to use the machines for the first time' is clearer.

× So if they are little bit mistake then it can damage the machine and they also can be dangerous for the user.

✓ So if there is a little mistake, then it can damage the machine and can also be dangerous for the user.

'They are little bit mistake' is incorrect; it should be 'there is a little mistake' to indicate existence. 'They also can be dangerous' is unclear; 'can also be dangerous' is better. Pronouns must clearly refer to the correct nouns.

× I think they need to read instructions first then try to.

✓ I think they need to read instructions first, then try to use the machines.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'try to' without an object or verb. Adding 'use the machines' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.