机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，建议注意单复数形式和冠词的使用，同时避免重复表达。可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the TV because it is very convenient. I enjoy watching different types of programs, especially dramas, and my TV offers many free dramas to choose from.

建議: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save me a lot of time when doing housework.

建議: 回答中单词使用错误（introductions应为instructions），语法和表达不够准确。建议注意词汇准确性，简洁表达，并使用连接词。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it is convenient and saves time. For example, last week I bought a coffee machine and read the instructions carefully to learn how to use it.

建議: 回答中存在严重语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议学习正确的表达方式，使用准确词汇，并举具体例子支持观点。

範例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because it helps me save time and understand how to use the product properly. For example, when I bought a new electronic device, I read the instructions carefully.

× I enjoy watching different type of program especially dramas and my TV's have many free dramas so I can choose.

✓ I enjoy watching different types of programs especially dramas and my TV has many free dramas so I can choose.

这里“different type of program”应为复数形式“different types of programs”，因为表示多种类型的节目；“my TV's have”中“TV's”错误使用了复数，应为单数“my TV has”，因为电视机是单数。

× I think it is very important because it can help me service time will I need to see if I don't have them?

✓ I think it is very important because it can help me save time. What will I do if I don't have them?

原句中“service time”应为“save time”，动词使用错误；“will I need to see if I don't have them?”语序和表达不正确，改为“What will I do if I don't have them?”更符合英语习惯。

× I need many times to do my housework.

✓ I need a lot of time to do my housework.

“many times”表示多次，而这里应表达“很多时间”，应使用“a lot of time”或“much time”。

× Yes, I read the introductions before the machines because I think it is very convenient and it can saves my time.

✓ Yes, I read the instructions before using the machines because I think it is very convenient and it can save my time.

“read the introductions before the machines”表达不正确，应为“read the instructions before using the machines”；“introductions”应为“instructions”；“can saves”中“saves”应为原形“save”，因为情态动词后动词用原形。

× Last week I bought a coffee machine. I read the introductions on what how I use it.

✓ Last week I bought a coffee machine. I read the instructions on how to use it.

“introductions”应为“instructions”；“on what how I use it”表达不正确，应为“on how to use it”。

× I think read the introduction is useful because it can service my loss of time and help me understand how to use sales.

✓ I think reading the instructions is useful because it can save my time and help me understand how to use the sales.

“read the introduction”应改为动名词形式“reading the instructions”；“service my loss of time”应为“save my time”；“use sales”表达不清，应为“use the sales”或更具体表达。

× For example when I bought a new electric, I need a introduction.

✓ For example, when I bought a new electric appliance, I needed an instruction manual.

“a new electric”不完整，应为“a new electric appliance”；“a introduction”错误，因“introduction”以元音音素开头，冠词应为“an”；时态应与上下文一致，过去时“needed”。