机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些不连贯，出现了重复和语法错误，建议回答时保持句子完整且逻辑清晰，避免重复表达。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体原因支持观点。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the dishwasher because it saves me a lot of time and effort, especially in winter when washing dishes with cold water is uncomfortable.

建議: 回答较为简单，语法有小错误，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并提供更具体的细节。

範例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in my house because the washing machine helps clean clothes efficiently, and the sweeping machine keeps the floor clean regularly, saving time and effort.

建議: 回答较长且有些重复，建议简洁表达并使用连接词，使回答更自然流畅。

範例: I usually don't read instructions before using a machine, but if it's new to me, like the sweeping machine, I read the manual to understand how to use it properly.

建議: 回答基本完整，但有重复词汇，建议注意用词准确，避免重复，同时可以用更丰富的词汇表达观点。

範例: Yes, reading instructions is crucial because using a machine incorrectly can damage it and reduce its lifespan.

× It takes so much time and the water is really cold when it come to winter.

✓ It takes so much time and the water is really cold when it comes to winter.

动词come在这里需要第三人称单数形式，因为主语是单数的water。正确形式是comes。

× washing machines helps people washing clothes and sweeping machines can sweep the floor regularly.

✓ washing machines help people wash clothes and sweeping machines can sweep the floor regularly.

主语washing machines是复数，谓语动词help也应使用复数形式help，且动词后应使用动词原形wash而非动名词washing。

× washing machines helps people washing clothes and sweeping machines can sweep the floor regularly.

✓ washing machines help people wash clothes and sweeping machines can sweep the floor regularly.

动词help后接动词原形wash，而不是动名词washing。

× I seldom read the instructions before using the machine, but if the machine is very new and I never used it before, I will read the instructions like the sweeping machine because this is the first time I use it so I watch the manual.

✓ I seldom read the instructions before using the machine, but if the machine is very new and I have never used it before, I will read the instructions like the sweeping machine because this is the first time I use it so I watch the manual.

never used应改为have never used，表示过去到现在的经历，使用现在完成时。

× I seldom read the instructions before using the machine, but if the machine is very new and I never used it before, I will read the instructions like the sweeping machine because this is the first time I use it so I watch the manual.

✓ I seldom read the instructions before using the machine, but if the machine is very new and I have never used it before, I will read the instructions like the sweeping machine because this is the first time I use it so I watch the manual.

watch the manual不合适，应改为read the manual，因为manual是说明书，通常用read。

× Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using them because if you use the use the machine in the wrong way it may cause damages to the machine.

✓ Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using them because if you use the machine in the wrong way it may cause damage to the machine.

重复使用了use the，需删除多余的use；damages通常用作动词或复数名词，表示多处损害，这里应使用不可数名词damage。