机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like 'all my clothes' and try to combine sentences for better flow. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me clean my clothes easily and saves a lot of time.

建議: Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like 'because' or 'therefore' to connect your ideas. Also, be careful with word choice, for example, 'sweeping machines' instead of 'sweating machines'.

範例: Yes, both washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they make cleaning easier and more efficient. For instance, my home has both, which helps me manage household chores quickly.

建議: Your answer is relevant but can be clearer and more concise. Avoid repeating phrases like 'know about to know all about'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'so' appropriately to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it properly and avoid damaging it by pressing the wrong buttons.

建議: Avoid repeating the same idea twice. Make your answer more natural by combining sentences and using linking words like 'because' to explain why it is important.

範例: Yes, it is important to read the instructions because it ensures we use machines correctly and safely.

× Because in the washing machine I can easily wash my clothes and all my dirty items.

✓ I can easily wash my clothes and all my dirty items in the washing machine.

Starting a sentence with 'Because' without completing the thought creates a sentence fragment. The sentence should be restructured to form a complete sentence.

× Nowadays it is very difficult for us to clean up all The Dirty clothes with hand.

✓ Nowadays it is very difficult for us to clean up all the dirty clothes by hand.

The definite article 'The' should not be capitalized mid-sentence. Also, 'with hand' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'by hand'.

× So that's why in every home each washing machine and sweating machines are available and in my home they both are available and I can wash easily my dirty clothes and all my items.

✓ So that's why in every home, washing machines and sweeping machines are available, and in my home, both are available, and I can easily wash my dirty clothes and all my items.

There is inconsistency in singular and plural forms: 'each washing machine and sweating machines' mixes singular and plural incorrectly. Also, 'sweating machines' is a typo; it should be 'sweeping machines'. The sentence is also lengthy and needs commas for clarity.

× Yes, of course I definitely read all the instructions where before using a machine because it is very mandatory for us to know about to know all about the machine, how to use it.

✓ Yes, of course I definitely read all the instructions before using a machine because it is very important for us to know all about the machine and how to use it.

The phrase 'where before using a machine' is incorrect; 'before using a machine' is sufficient. Also, 'very mandatory' is incorrect; 'mandatory' alone or 'very important' is better. The phrase 'to know about to know all about' is redundant and should be simplified.

× Sometimes we press the wrong button and machine got damaged with the first use.

✓ Sometimes we press the wrong button and the machine gets damaged on the first use.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'machine'. Also, 'got damaged' is informal; 'gets damaged' fits better here. 'With the first use' should be 'on the first use'.

× So we definitely need out all the instructions about this machine.

✓ So we definitely need to read all the instructions about this machine.

The phrase 'need out all the instructions' is incorrect. The verb 'need' should be followed by an infinitive verb like 'to read' to complete the meaning.

× Yes, I mentioned before it's very important for us to read all instructions about the machines and all the equipment that we use.

✓ Yes, I mentioned before that it's very important for us to read all instructions about the machines and all the equipment that we use.

Adding 'that' after 'mentioned before' improves sentence clarity and correctness.

× And it is very mandatory for us to know about all about the machines and items.

✓ And it is very important for us to know all about the machines and items.

'Very mandatory' is incorrect; 'very important' is appropriate. Also, 'to know about all about' is redundant; 'to know all about' is correct.