机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，存在语法错误和用词不当，如“you can just to ask it”应为“you can just ask it”，“they will spend”应为“it will spend”。建议注意动词形式和主谓一致，避免语法错误，同时回答可以更简洁自然。

範例: My favourite machine at home is a sweeping robot called Echo. It is very convenient because I can just ask it to clean the floor, and it usually takes about two hours to finish the job.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“a lot of the household works”应为“a lot of household chores”，“attribute by ourselves”表达不准确。建议使用更准确的词汇和表达，避免口语化的填充词，回答更连贯。

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very useful because they help us complete many household chores quickly. This gives us more free time to relax, read books, or improve ourselves.

建議: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在语法错误，如“to using”应为“to use”，以及“recent days”表达不自然。建议注意动词不定式的正确使用，并用更自然的表达方式。

範例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because nowadays many machines are quite complicated. It helps me understand how to operate them properly.

建議: 回答内容完整且表达清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，如“therefore”或“so”。建议丰富句型结构，提升表达的连贯性和自然度。

範例: Yes, definitely. Without reading the instructions, it can be difficult to operate machines safely. Therefore, I always read them to avoid mistakes or damaging the equipment.

× You can just to ask it to do the sweeping and they will spend 2 hours or even longer to cleaning the floor in your homes.

✓ You can just ask it to do the sweeping and it will spend 2 hours or even longer cleaning the floor in your home.

动词后面不需要加不定式的“to”，应直接用动词原形。'to cleaning' 应改为动名词形式 'cleaning'，因为表示持续的动作。'they' 指代不明确，应改为单数 'it'，与前文的 'a sweeping machine' 一致。'homes' 应改为单数 'home'，表示一般的居住环境。

× You can just to ask it to do the sweeping and they will spend 2 hours or even longer to cleaning the floor in your homes.

✓ You can just ask it to do the sweeping and it will spend 2 hours or even longer cleaning the floor in your home.

'homes' 是复数形式，但这里指的是一般的居住环境，应该用单数 'home'。

× the sweeping machines and washing machines helped us to do a lot of the household works.

✓ the sweeping machines and washing machines help us to do a lot of the household work.

'household works' 中 'works' 不可数，应该用单数形式 'work'。另外，时态应与上下文一致，改为现在时 'help'。

× the sweeping machines and washing machines helped us to do a lot of the household works.

✓ the sweeping machines and washing machines help us to do a lot of the household work.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时 'help'，而非过去时 'helped'。

× So we have a lot of times to attribute by ourselves, such as reading some books and developing ourselves sort of things.

✓ So we have a lot of time to spend by ourselves, such as reading some books and developing ourselves, sort of things.

'attribute' 用法错误，应改为 'spend'。'times' 应为不可数名词 'time'。句子中缺少逗号以分隔短语。

× so it is hard for me to using a machine directly without the guide.

✓ so it is hard for me to use a machine directly without the guide.

'to' 后面应接动词原形，'using' 应改为 'use'。

× Without the instructions it can be difficult to operate them safely and I always want to avoid making mistakes or damaging the machine.

✓ Without the instructions, it can be difficult to operate them safely, and I always want to avoid making mistakes or damaging the machine.

句子中缺少逗号，影响阅读流畅。

× Without the instructions it can be difficult to operate them safely and I always want to avoid making mistakes or damaging the machine.

✓ Without the instructions, it can be difficult to operate it safely, and I always want to avoid making mistakes or damaging the machine.

'them' 指代不明确，应改为单数 'it'，与前文的 'machine' 一致。