机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'easily' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it cleans clothes much faster and more efficiently than washing by hand, which really helps my mother save time.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

範例: Yes, I believe washing and sweeping machines are essential because they save time and effort. For instance, washing machines clean clothes thoroughly without manual scrubbing, and sweeping machines help keep the house tidy quickly.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and lacks fluency. Try to avoid repeating phrases and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, explain why reading instructions is important with specific reasons.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely and avoid accidents.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Focus on making your points clear and complete. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why reading instructions is important.

範例: Yes, I believe reading instructions is crucial because improper use of machines can lead to accidents or damage. For example, not following safety guidelines on a washing machine might cause electrical hazards.

× In my home, I mostly like the washing machine because this machine is very useful as it cleans up a whole clothes very easily as compared to washing clothes by our hands and it helps our mother to wash clothes easily.

✓ In my home, I mostly like the washing machine because this machine is very useful as it cleans whole clothes very easily as compared to washing clothes by our hands and it helps our mother to wash clothes easily.

The phrase 'a whole clothes' is incorrect because 'clothes' is a plural noun and cannot be preceded by the singular article 'a'. The correct phrase is 'whole clothes' without 'a'. This correction ensures proper singular/plural agreement.

× Yes, I think that the washing machines and sweeping machines are very important as washing machines helps us to wash clothes easily as compared to washing the clothes by our hands.

✓ Yes, I think that the washing machines and sweeping machines are very important as washing machines help us to wash clothes easily as compared to washing the clothes by our hands.

The subject 'washing machines' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' instead of 'helps' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Because in the washing machines firstly we wash the clothes and by putting the clothes in it and wash it easily.

✓ In the washing machines, we first put the clothes in and then wash them easily.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkward. Reordering the sentence and removing unnecessary words improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Because if if we did not read the instructions, then sometimes it becomes a danger towards us because that's why it is very it is very important to use instructions before using the machine.

✓ Because if we do not read the instructions, then sometimes it becomes dangerous for us; that's why it is very important to use instructions before using the machine.

The use of 'did not read' is incorrect here because the sentence talks about a general condition, so present tense 'do not read' is appropriate. Also, 'danger towards us' is incorrect; 'dangerous for us' is the correct phrase.

× Yes, I think that it is very important to read the instructions because while using a machine such as a washing machine or other machines, if we did not use the instructions then sometimes it becomes dangerous towards us and that's why it is very important to use.

✓ Yes, I think that it is very important to read the instructions because while using a machine such as a washing machine or other machines, if we do not use the instructions, then sometimes it becomes dangerous for us, and that's why it is very important to use them.

The phrase 'if we did not use' should be in present tense 'if we do not use' because it refers to a general truth. Also, 'dangerous towards us' is incorrect; 'dangerous for us' is correct. The sentence was incomplete and needed 'them' to refer to instructions.