机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. To improve, focus on using correct sentence structures and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of physical effort. I just need to load the clothes and add detergent, and it washes and dries them automatically. Compared to other household chores, it is much easier and more convenient for me.

建議: Your response has several grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions that affect clarity. To improve, try to organize your ideas logically using linking words, and provide specific reasons or examples. Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases and focus on clear, natural English.

範例: Of course, washing machines and sweeping machines play an important role in our daily lives. Without a washing machine, we would have to wash clothes by hand, which requires a lot of physical effort. Similarly, sweeping machines help keep our homes clean more efficiently than manual sweeping.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, organize your ideas logically with linking words and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using any machine. For example, I learned how to operate the washing machine by reading its manual. This helps me avoid accidents like electric shocks. I also advise my parents to read instructions before using products such as soap or shampoo because sometimes manufacturers include important information.

建議: Your answer is on topic but has grammatical mistakes and some unclear parts. To improve, use correct sentence structures and clearer examples. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise.

範例: Yes, I believe it is very important to read instructions because they provide valuable information. For instance, my sister has a peanut allergy, so she always reads ingredient labels carefully before using any product to avoid allergic reactions.

× Well, washing machine is one of my favorite machine in my life because it does not require much physical work.

✓ Well, the washing machine is one of my favorite machines in my life because it does not require much physical work.

The noun 'washing machine' is singular and needs the definite article 'the' to specify it. Also, 'machine' should be plural 'machines' to agree with 'one of my favorite'. This corrects singular/plural agreement and article usage.

× I have to just put on the clothes on it and washing powder it make a dry and wet automatically and whenever I have I have to choose the house chore.

✓ I just have to put the clothes in it, and the washing powder makes it dry and wet automatically whenever I have to choose a house chore.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'washing powder'. Also, 'put on the clothes on it' is incorrect; it should be 'put the clothes in it'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I recommend it the washing machine because it is quite easy for me as compared to other task.

✓ I recommend the washing machine because it is quite easy for me compared to other tasks.

'Other task' should be plural 'other tasks' to match the context. Also, 'recommend it the washing machine' is incorrect; 'recommend the washing machine' is correct.

× Of of course, washing machine and sweeping machine are mainly A prominent play a prominent role in every person life.

✓ Of course, washing machines and sweeping machines mainly play a prominent role in every person's life.

Both 'washing machine' and 'sweeping machine' should be plural to match the plural verb 'play'. 'A prominent' is unnecessary and incorrect here. 'Every person life' should be 'every person's life' to show possession.

× Because without a washing machine we can't be wash our clothes, we have to be to wash by our hand.

✓ Because without a washing machine, we can't wash our clothes; we have to wash them by hand.

The phrase 'can't be wash' is incorrect; it should be 'can't wash'. Also, 'have to be to wash' is incorrect; it should be 'have to wash'. 'By our hand' should be 'by hand'.

× It's just require a lot of physical strength.

✓ It just requires a lot of physical strength.

The verb 'require' should be 'requires' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The modal verb 'just' is used incorrectly here; 'just' is an adverb meaning 'simply' and does not affect verb form.

× It's not a cup of tea and sweeping machine because sometime we have to tie our clothes in a million.

✓ It's not a cup of tea to use a sweeping machine because sometimes we have to tie our clothes in a million ways.

The phrase 'not a cup of tea' needs 'to use' to clarify meaning. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. The phrase 'tie our clothes in a million' is incomplete; 'in a million ways' is more appropriate.

× I always prefer to read the instruction before using a machine.

✓ I always prefer to read the instructions before using a machine.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines.

× Even I have learned to use the washing machine by read the instruction.

✓ I even learned to use the washing machine by reading the instructions.

The verb 'read' should be in the gerund form 'reading' after 'by'. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions'.

× Otherwise I am bit very scared from it to getting a electric shock from it.

✓ Otherwise, I am a bit scared of getting an electric shock from it.

The phrase 'scared from' is incorrect; it should be 'scared of'. 'A electric' should be 'an electric'. The phrase 'to getting' is incorrect; it should be 'of getting'.

× Moreover, I always recommend to my parents also before using any things whether it is a soap or hair shampoo, you should have read it because sometime manufacturer adopted the mall practices.

✓ Moreover, I always recommend to my parents that before using anything, whether it is soap or shampoo, they should read the instructions because sometimes manufacturers adopt bad practices.

'Any things' should be 'anything'. 'You should have read it' is incorrect; it should be 'they should read the instructions'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Manufacturer adopted the mall practices' is incorrect; it should be 'manufacturers adopt bad practices'.

× Of course it is a paramount to read the instruction because by read the instruction we got a lot of information that we can take an example of my sister who has who are who have an allergy from a peanuts.

✓ Of course, it is paramount to read the instructions because by reading them we get a lot of information. For example, my sister has an allergy to peanuts.

'A paramount' is incorrect; 'paramount' is an adjective and does not need an article here. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'By read' should be 'by reading'. 'Who has who are who have' is incorrect; simplified to 'has'. 'An allergy from a peanuts' should be 'an allergy to peanuts'.

× So whenever they had used any type of ingredients, they prefer to read the instructions before use it.

✓ So whenever they use any type of ingredients, they prefer to read the instructions before using them.

'Had used' is past perfect, but present tense 'use' fits better here. 'Before use it' should be 'before using them' to agree with plural 'ingredients'.