机器— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
What is your favourite machine in your home?
考生
My favorite machine must be my computer. With my computer, I can play games or watching TV series in my daily life. I don't think I can live without it.
考官
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
考生
Yes, definitely. I think they are quite important for me. I don't think I can live without them. With these machines, my home always stay clean.
考官
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
考生
To be honest, I seldom read the instructions. They are usually too long and have too many characters, so I'm lazy to read them. I should just try to use the machine and luckily I always success.
考官
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
考生
Yes, I think it's quite significant to read the instructions. There are always some tips or warnings on the with which can help us be safer when using the machines. However, although I know it's important.
評估
總分
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
分數: 75.0建議: 你的回答表达了对电脑的喜爱，但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。例如，“play games or watching TV series”中动词形式不一致。建议注意动词形式的一致性，并尝试使用更丰富的词汇和句型，使回答更流畅自然。
範例: My favorite machine at home is my computer because it allows me to play games and watch TV series every day. I find it indispensable in my daily life.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答中表达了观点，但句子结构较简单，且存在语法错误，如“my home always stay clean”应为“my home always stays clean”。建议使用连接词丰富句子结构，并注意主谓一致。
範例: Yes, definitely. I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are essential because they help keep my home clean and save me a lot of time and effort.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
分數: 65.0建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“I'm lazy to read them”应为“I am too lazy to read them”，“I always success”应为“I always succeed”。建议注意动词形式和表达的准确性，同时可以增加一些原因或感受，使回答更具体。
範例: To be honest, I rarely read the instructions because they are often too long and complicated. Instead, I prefer to try using the machine directly, and fortunately, I usually succeed.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答不完整，最后一句话未表达完整意思，且存在语法错误。建议完整表达观点，避免句子中断，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。
範例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because they often contain useful tips and warnings that help us use machines safely. Although I know this, I sometimes neglect to read them carefully.
文法
× With my computer, I can play games or watching TV series in my daily life.
✓ With my computer, I can play games or watch TV series in my daily life.
在情态动词can后，动词应使用原形，不能用动名词形式watching。
× With these machines, my home always stay clean.
✓ With these machines, my home always stays clean.
主语my home是第三人称单数，谓语动词stay应加-s，变为stays，保持主谓一致。
× I should just try to use the machine and luckily I always success.
✓ I should just try to use the machine and luckily I always succeed.
success是名词，句中应使用动词succeed表示“成功”，且时态应与句意一致。
× There are always some tips or warnings on the with which can help us be safer when using the machines.
✓ There are always some tips or warnings with which can help us be safer when using the machines.
介词on使用错误，应去掉on，直接用with引导定语从句，表示“带有……的提示或警告”。
× However, although I know it's important.
✓ However, although I know it's important, I don't always read them.
句子不完整，缺少主句，导致结构错误，应补充完整表达。
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