机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of saying 'I know I can't survive without it because it help me to keep my body fit,' you could say 'I rely on it daily as it helps me stay healthy.' Also, use singular/plural forms correctly, e.g., 'equipment' instead of 'equipments'.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the juicer. I use it daily to make fresh orange juice, which helps me stay healthy and fit.

建議: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid vague phrases like 'sometimes it is not.' Use linking words to compare and contrast ideas. Also, avoid gender-specific language; instead of 'help to women,' say 'help people.' For example, 'Washing machines are essential as they make washing clothes easier and more efficient. Sweeping machines are also useful, although they may not be necessary all the time.'

範例: Washing machines are essential at home because they help people wash clothes easily and efficiently. On the other hand, sweeping machines can be helpful, but they are not always necessary.

建議: Try to avoid unnecessary self-description like 'I am lethargic person' which is unrelated. Use clearer and grammatically correct sentences. Use linking words to explain reasons. For example, 'Although I can be lazy at times, I always read instructions before using any machine because they explain how to use it efficiently and safely.'

範例: Although I can be lazy sometimes, I always read the instructions before using any machine because they show the correct and safe way to operate it.

建議: Your answer is too short and lacks explanation. Always try to give a complete answer with reasons or examples. For instance, you can say, 'Yes, it is very important to read instructions because they help us use machines safely and avoid damage.'

範例: Yes, it is very important to read instructions because they help us use machines safely and prevent any damage.

× Well there are a lot of equipments in my home but my favorite machine is a juicer that I use on my daily basis to make orange juice and I know I can't survive without it because it help me to keep my body fit.

✓ Well there are a lot of equipment in my home but my favorite machine is a juicer that I use on a daily basis to make orange juice and I know I can't survive without it because it helps me to keep my body fit.

The word 'equipment' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'equipments'. Also, 'daily basis' requires the article 'a' before it. The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. These corrections ensure proper singular/plural usage and subject-verb agreement.

× Yeah Sir, washing machine is the basic need at home because it help to women in the home to wash clothes in easy and effective manner and on the other side sweeping machines are also helpful but sometimes it is not.

✓ Yeah Sir, the washing machine is a basic need at home because it helps women in the home to wash clothes in an easy and effective manner and on the other side sweeping machines are also helpful but sometimes they are not.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'washing machine'. Also, 'washing machine' needs the definite article 'the' and 'a basic need' is more appropriate. 'Help to women' should be 'helps women' without 'to'. 'Easy' needs the article 'an' before it. 'It is not' referring to 'sweeping machines' should be 'they are not' to match plural subject. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement, article usage, and pronoun agreement.

× Well I am lethargic person but in this matter I am very punctual. I read all the instructions before using any machine because it provide how to use machine in efficient manner and how to correct user and also advise other to use of the given instruction before using machine.

✓ Well I am a lethargic person but in this matter I am very punctual. I read all the instructions before using any machine because it provides how to use the machine in an efficient manner and how to use it correctly and also advises others to use the given instructions before using the machine.

The verb 'provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The phrase 'how to correct user' is unclear and corrected to 'how to use it correctly'. 'Advise other to use of the given instruction' is corrected to 'advises others to use the given instructions'. Articles 'a' and 'the' are added appropriately. These corrections improve subject-verb agreement, clarity, and article usage.