机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích lý do và kết luận ngắn gọn.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time. Since I am often busy, it helps me wash many clothes quickly and efficiently, which is very convenient.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu cú rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách logic, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp lý do cụ thể và ví dụ minh họa cho quan điểm của bạn.

範例: I believe washing machines are essential because they handle many clothes thoroughly. However, sweeping machines are less important since cleaning the house can be done easily by hand.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi sai từ, đồng thời thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because some machines are complex. For instance, when I bought a new oven, I couldn't turn it on at first, so reading the manual helped me understand how to use it properly.

建議: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn để minh họa quan điểm.

範例: Yes, I think reading instructions is important because machines can be unfamiliar. For example, when I first used a vacuum cleaner, I found it complicated, so reading the manual helped me operate it correctly.

× I think it is washing machine.

✓ I think it is the washing machine.

The noun 'washing machine' is a singular countable noun and requires a definite article 'the' when referring to a specific item known to both speaker and listener.

× I am a lazy person and I so busy so I don't want to do anything else.

✓ I am a lazy person and I am so busy, so I don't want to do anything else.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' after 'I' to form the correct present tense structure 'I am so busy'. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses.

× When I come back home my my washing machine can have me wash so many clothes and it's so good.

✓ When I come back home, my washing machine can help me wash so many clothes and it's so good.

The phrase 'can have me wash' is incorrect; 'can help me wash' is the correct expression. Also, there is a repeated word 'my' and a comma is needed after the introductory clause.

× Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

✓ Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

No correction needed for this sentence.

× I think washing machines are important but wiping machines are not because wash clothes is complete and have so many stuff.

✓ I think washing machines are important but wiping machines are not because washing clothes is complete and involves so many things.

The verb 'wash' should be 'washing' to function as a gerund. 'Have so many stuff' is incorrect; 'involves so many things' is more appropriate. 'Stuff' is uncountable and should not be preceded by 'many'.

× But scrap a house is very easy and I can call it and something I forgot when I swapping a house.

✓ But scrubbing a house is very easy and I can do it, and sometimes I forget things when I am sweeping a house.

'Scrap a house' is incorrect; 'scrubbing' or 'cleaning' is appropriate. 'I can call it' is incorrect; 'I can do it' fits better. 'Something I forgot' should be 'sometimes I forget things'. 'Swapping a house' is incorrect; 'sweeping a house' is correct. Also, present continuous 'I am sweeping' is needed.

× Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because some machine is so complex and I have to read how to use it.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because some machines are so complex and I have to read how to use them.

'Some machine' should be plural 'some machines' to agree with 'are'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'machines'.

× For example, when I buy overcome I cannot turn on it and I have to read instructions so clearly.

✓ For example, when I buy a vacuum cleaner, I cannot turn it on and I have to read the instructions carefully.

'Overcome' is incorrect; likely meant 'vacuum cleaner'. 'Turn on it' should be 'turn it on'. 'Read instructions so clearly' should be 'read the instructions carefully'.

× Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because the machine is so strange and we have never used it before.

✓ Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because the machine is so unfamiliar and we have never used it before.

'Strange' is not the best adjective here; 'unfamiliar' better expresses the meaning. No pronoun error here.

× For example, when I want to turn on the vacuum cleaner, I feel so complex.

✓ For example, when I want to turn on the vacuum cleaner, I feel so confused.

'Feel so complex' is incorrect; 'feel so confused' correctly expresses the intended meaning.