机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as "throughout the year in summer" and "across the room" which is unclear. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and vary your vocabulary slightly.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it keeps me comfortable all year round. In summer, it cools the room effectively, making the heat much more bearable, and in winter, it provides warmth. Overall, it greatly improves the atmosphere in my home.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but lacks coherence and contains some grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your points logically, and avoid vague phrases like "as in". Also, try to be more specific about why vacuum cleaners are complicated and why washing machines are important.

範例: I rarely use vacuum cleaners at home because they don't work well on our thick carpets and can be complicated to operate. However, washing machines are much more important since they save a lot of time and clean clothes thoroughly, which is essential for our busy daily routine.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains awkward phrasing and informal language such as "you know" and "caveated" (which is incorrect). Try to use more formal and precise vocabulary, and structure your sentences clearly with appropriate linking words.

範例: I usually try to read the instructions before using a machine, but sometimes they are difficult to understand because of technical terms. Therefore, I prefer to learn by experimenting and adjusting the machine myself, which helps me understand it better.

建議: This is a well-structured and clear answer with good use of linking words and relevant vocabulary. To improve further, you could add a specific example or personal experience to make your answer more engaging and detailed.

範例: Yes, I think it is essential to read the instructions before using any machines at home because they explain the technical details clearly and help you operate the device safely. For example, when I first used my new washing machine, the instructions helped me understand the different settings, which saved me time and prevented mistakes.

× At my home, rarely use vacuum cleaners because they are not very effective on our thick carpets.

✓ At my home, I rarely use vacuum cleaners because they are not very effective on our thick carpets.

The original sentence lacks a subject before the verb 'rarely use'. Adding 'I' clarifies the subject performing the action, which is necessary for correct sentence structure.

× On the other hand, washing machines are much more important, as in they save a lot of time and clean clothes thoroughly, which is essential for our busy day routine.

✓ On the other hand, washing machines are much more important, as they save a lot of time and clean clothes thoroughly, which is essential for our busy daily routine.

The phrase 'as in they' is incorrect; 'as they' is the correct form to introduce the explanation. Also, 'busy day routine' should be 'busy daily routine' to correctly describe a routine that occurs every day.

× I usually try to read the instructions before using a machine, but sometimes I find them quite caveated because they contain many technical terms.

✓ I usually try to read the instructions before using a machine, but sometimes I find them quite complicated because they contain many technical terms.

The word 'caveated' is incorrectly used here; the correct adjective is 'complicated' to describe something difficult to understand.

× Therefore I prefer to learn by, you know, experimenting and configuring things the machine myself, which helps me understand it better.

✓ Therefore, I prefer to learn by, you know, experimenting and configuring the machine myself, which helps me understand it better.

A comma is needed after 'Therefore' to separate the introductory adverb from the main clause. Also, 'configuring things the machine myself' is incorrect; it should be 'configuring the machine myself' for clarity and correct word order.