机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中出现了不相关的词汇（Tuberculosis），且表达不够自然流畅。建议避免无关词汇，使用更准确的词汇表达观点，同时注意语法和拼写错误，如"strengthen our band"应为"strengthen our bond"。回答应简洁且逻辑清晰。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the TV because I can connect my Nintendo Switch to it, which allows me to enjoy games on a larger screen. I often share this experience with my friends and family, which helps strengthen our bond and brings us closer together.

建議: 回答中出现了不相关或错误的比喻（"the man who pushes a stone"），且"swimming machine"应为"sweeping machine"。表达不够清晰，逻辑混乱。建议使用更贴切的比喻，避免语义不明，且注意词汇准确性。

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and effort. Without them, doing housework would be tiring and time-consuming, which can be frustrating for many people.

建議: 回答较为自然且结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。建议在句子间加入适当的连接词，如"however"、"therefore"等，使逻辑更连贯。

範例: Well, it depends on the machine. If I'm very familiar with it, like a washing machine or vacuum cleaner, I usually don't read the instructions because I already know how to use them. However, if the machine is new or potentially dangerous, I always make sure to read the instructions carefully.

建議: 回答内容完整且表达清晰，但可以增加一些具体细节或例子，使回答更丰富。建议补充具体原因或例子来支持观点。

範例: Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions, especially when the machine is new or potentially dangerous. For example, reading the guide can help us understand safety precautions and how to operate the device properly, which can prevent accidents.

× This special experience strengthen our band and keeps our relationship closer.

✓ This special experience strengthens our bond and keeps our relationship closer.

主语是单数'special experience'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'strengthens'。另外，'band'应为'bond'，表示关系纽带。

× This special experience strengthen our band and keeps our relationship closer.

✓ This special experience strengthens our bond and keeps our relationship closer.

'band'是错误用词，应为'bond'，表示关系纽带。

× So having the swimming machine and the washing machine is really a great help which can definitely bring people happiness because the housework is really time convincing.

✓ So having the sweeping machine and the washing machine is really a great help which can definitely bring people happiness because the housework is really time-consuming.

'swimming machine'应为'sweeping machine'，指扫地机。'time convincing'应为'time-consuming'，表示耗时的。

× So having the swimming machine and the washing machine is really a great help which can definitely bring people happiness because the housework is really time convincing.

✓ So having the sweeping machine and the washing machine is really a great help which can definitely bring people happiness because the housework is really time-consuming.

形容词使用错误，'time convincing'应改为'time-consuming'，表示耗费时间。

× If I'm very familiar with the machine, like the washing machine or a vacuum cleaner, I wouldn't bother to read the instructions because I already know how to use it.

✓ If I'm very familiar with the machine, like the washing machine or a vacuum cleaner, I wouldn't bother to read the instructions because I already know how to use them.

前文提到多个机器，指代应使用复数代词'them'，而非单数'it'。

× Reading the machine guide can help us to avoid accidents and can help know how to operate the device safely.

✓ Reading the machine guide can help us to avoid accidents and can help us know how to operate the device safely.

缺少主语，'can help know'应为'can help us know'，使句子完整。