机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better flow. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and add more specific details about why the microwave is helpful.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the microwave because it heats food quickly and saves me a lot of time, especially after coming back from outside. For example, I can warm up leftovers in just a few minutes, which is very convenient.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide more specific examples.

範例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time. While these machines do their work, I can focus on other tasks, which makes my daily routine more efficient.

建議: Your answer is honest but informal and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to use more formal language and correct grammar. Also, explain your opinion with linking words and specific reasons.

範例: Actually, I usually don't read the instructions because I find them time-consuming. However, if I encounter any problems, I search for solutions online, which helps me understand how to use the machine properly.

建議: Your answer repeats ideas and lacks coherence. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, consider acknowledging different perspectives to enrich your answer.

範例: I don't think reading instructions is always necessary because I can usually figure out how to use machines on my own. However, for complex devices, reading the manual might be helpful to avoid mistakes.

× I think so it's really important because when you need to save your time or do something quickly, you can use just washing machine or swapping machine.

✓ I think so it's really important because when you need to save your time or do something quickly, you can use just a washing machine or a sweeping machine.

The nouns 'washing machine' and 'sweeping machine' are countable and singular here, so they require the indefinite article 'a' before them to be grammatically correct.

× And in that time when this machines do their work, you can do other things and it's really helpful for your.

✓ And at that time when these machines do their work, you can do other things and it's really helpful for you.

The demonstrative pronoun 'this' should be plural 'these' to agree with the plural noun 'machines'. Also, 'for your' is incorrect; it should be 'for you' as 'your' is a possessive adjective and needs a noun after it.

× And in that time when this machines do their work, you can do other things and it's really helpful for your.

✓ And at that time when these machines do their work, you can do other things and it's really helpful for you.

The phrase 'helpful for your' is incorrect because 'your' is a possessive adjective and must be followed by a noun. The correct pronoun here is 'you'.

× Maybe almost every person don't read any instructions.

✓ Maybe almost every person doesn't read any instructions.

The subject 'every person' is singular, so the verb should be singular 'doesn't' instead of 'don't' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Maybe almost every person don't read any instructions.

✓ Maybe almost every person doesn't read any instructions.

The verb must agree with the singular subject 'every person', so 'doesn't' is correct instead of 'don't'.