机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应避免语法错误和重复表达，句子结构应更清晰自然。例如，“washing machines”应为单数“washing machine”，并且“cloth washing”应改为“washing clothes”。此外，表达应简洁，避免冗余。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time washing clothes. Since I am a bit clumsy, I often get my clothes dirty, so having this machine is very helpful.

建議: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达不准确。应使用连接词使句子更流畅，并具体说明原因。

範例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and effort. Thanks to technological improvements, household chores have become much easier.

建議: 回答基本清晰，但有重复词汇“is is”，应注意语法准确。可以增加连接词使表达更自然。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it properly. Otherwise, I might waste time figuring it out by myself.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。应注意主谓一致和句子完整性，避免模糊和夸张的表达。

範例: Yes, I believe reading instructions is important not only for using machines but also in daily life. Understanding rules helps us avoid mistakes and problems.

× I would say the washing machines, it can reduce a lot of work of cloth washing and as I'm a clumsy person, I always have to wash a lot of clothings simply because of what I do and what I've done.

✓ I would say the washing machine, it can reduce a lot of work of cloth washing and as I'm a clumsy person, I always have to wash a lot of clothes simply because of what I do and what I've done.

这里“washing machines”应为单数“washing machine”，因为后面用的是单数代词“it”，主谓不一致。"clothings"是不可数名词，正确用法是“clothes”。

× I would say the washing machines, it can reduce a lot of work of cloth washing and as I'm a clumsy person, I always have to wash a lot of clothings simply because of what I do and what I've done.

✓ I would say the washing machine, it can reduce a lot of work of cloth washing and as I'm a clumsy person, I always have to wash a lot of clothes simply because of what I do and what I've done.

“a lot of clothings”中“clothings”不正确，衣服用复数形式“clothes”，且“a lot of”后面接可数名词复数或不可数名词。

× I would say the washing machines, it can reduce a lot of work of cloth washing and as I'm a clumsy person, I always have to wash a lot of clothings simply because of what I do and what I've done.

✓ I would say the washing machine, it can reduce a lot of work in washing clothes and as I'm a clumsy person, I always have to wash a lot of clothes simply because of what I do and what I've done.

“work of cloth washing”表达不自然，正确用法是“work in washing clothes”，介词使用错误。

× I would say the washing machines, it can reduce a lot of work of cloth washing and as I'm a clumsy person, I always have to wash a lot of clothings simply because of what I do and what I've done.

✓ I would say the washing machine, it can reduce a lot of work in washing clothes and as I'm a clumsy person, I always have to wash a lot of clothes simply because of what I do and what I've done.

前半句中“washing machines”是复数，后面用单数代词“it”，主谓不一致，应统一为单数。

× Yes, according to the technology improvements, it's reduced tons of work that. Spending time and it's reduced lots of times requirements according to that.

✓ Yes, according to technological improvements, it has reduced tons of work. It saves time and has reduced the time required accordingly.

原句时态混乱，且句子结构不完整。应使用现在完成时“has reduced”表示从过去到现在的影响，且句子应完整表达意思。

× Yes, according to the technology improvements, it's reduced tons of work that. Spending time and it's reduced lots of times requirements according to that.

✓ Yes, according to technological improvements, it has reduced tons of work. It saves time and has reduced the time required accordingly.

原句“Spending time and it's reduced lots of times requirements according to that.”结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，导致句意不明。需要重组句子使其完整通顺。

× Yes, I do. Reading instruction before using a machine is is crucial to me and if not it will be time consuming to figure out how to use it.

✓ Yes, I do. Reading instructions before using a machine is crucial to me, and if not, it will be time-consuming to figure out how to use it.

“Reading instruction before using a machine”中“instruction”应为复数“instructions”，且“time consuming”作为形容词应连写为“time-consuming”。

× Yes, I do. Reading instruction before using a machine is is crucial to me and if not it will be time consuming to figure out how to use it.

✓ Yes, I do. Reading instructions before using a machine is crucial to me, and if not, it will be time-consuming to figure out how to use it.

句中重复出现“is is”，且缺少逗号分隔复合句，导致句子结构不清晰。

× Yes, I do think reading the instructions are important first of all, not only on machine using but also on daily life reading instruction.

✓ Yes, I do think reading the instructions is important, first of all, not only when using machines but also in daily life reading instructions.

“reading the instructions are important”中主语是单数“reading”，谓语应使用单数“is”。

× Yes, I do think reading the instructions are important first of all, not only on machine using but also on daily life reading instruction.

✓ Yes, I do think reading the instructions is important, first of all, not only when using machines but also in daily life reading instructions.

“on machine using”应改为“when using machines”，“on daily life reading instruction”应改为“in daily life reading instructions”，介词使用错误。

× Yes, I do think reading the instructions are important first of all, not only on machine using but also on daily life reading instruction.

✓ Yes, I do think reading the instructions is important, first of all, not only when using machines but also in daily life reading instructions.

“reading the instructions”作为主语是单数行为，谓语应为单数“is”，且“instruction”应为复数“instructions”。

× Knowing the rules are really important. If you don't follow the rules it means ruined your life or maybe you will lose.

✓ Knowing the rules is really important. If you don't follow the rules, it means you have ruined your life or maybe you will lose.

“Knowing the rules”是单数行为，谓语应为“is”。“it means ruined your life”缺少主语“you”，应为“it means you have ruined your life”。