机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“so that we have no necessary to do it manually”应改为“so we don't need to do it manually”。建议注意句子结构的完整性和语法准确性，同时避免冗余表达。

範例: My favorite machine at home is the floor cleaning machine because it is very convenient and saves a lot of time. For example, it can effectively clean different types of floors, so we don't need to clean them manually.

建議: 回答中存在主谓一致错误，如“washing machine and sweeping machines are also important because it can save”应改为“they can save”。此外，表达略显重复和不够连贯，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Absolutely. I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they can save a lot of time and help us avoid tedious housework. Therefore, we can use this extra time to improve ourselves and learn new skills.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“machine become”应为“machines become”，“follow the step”应为“follow the steps”。建议注意时态和单复数形式的正确使用，同时使表达更简洁自然。

範例: Yes, because with the development of technology, machines have become more complex, which sometimes confuses me. So, to understand how to use them, I always read the instructions and follow the steps carefully.

建議: 回答中存在词汇使用错误，如“potential dangerous or risks”应为“potential dangers or risks”，“read the instruments”应为“read the instructions”。建议注意词汇的准确性和表达的清晰度。

範例: Yes, I think reading the instructions is very important because it saves time and helps avoid potential dangers or risks. For example, when I bought a coffee maker last year, I read the instructions carefully to learn how to operate and clean it.

× In my home, my favorite machine is floor cleaning machine, which is very convenient and can save a lot of time.

✓ In my home, my favorite machine is the floor cleaning machine, which is very convenient and can save a lot of time.

这里缺少定冠词“the”，因为“floor cleaning machine”是特指家里的那台机器。

× For instance, it can clean different types of floor effectively and so that we have no necessary to do it manually.

✓ For instance, it can clean different types of floors effectively so that we do not need to do it manually.

“floor”应使用复数形式“floors”，因为指多种类型的地板；“have no necessary”应改为“do not need”，表达不需要做某事。

× Absolutely. I think washing machine and sweeping machines are also important because it can save a lot of time and prevent us to doing the tedious housework.

✓ Absolutely. I think washing machines and sweeping machines are also important because they can save a lot of time and prevent us from doing the tedious housework.

“washing machine”应为复数“washing machines”与“sweeping machines”保持一致；“it can”应改为“they can”，主语复数；“prevent us to doing”应改为“prevent us from doing”，动词搭配错误。

× Absolutely. I think washing machine and sweeping machines are also important because it can save a lot of time and prevent us to doing the tedious housework.

✓ Absolutely. I think washing machines and sweeping machines are also important because they can save a lot of time and prevent us from doing the tedious housework.

“prevent”后应接介词“from”，表示阻止某人做某事。

× Yes, because with the development of the technology, the machine become more and more complex which makes me confused sometimes.

✓ Yes, because with the development of technology, the machines become more and more complex, which makes me confused sometimes.

“the technology”前的定冠词“the”可省略；“machine become”应为“machines become”，主谓一致；句中缺少逗号分隔从句。

× So to understand how to use the machine, I always read the instructions and follow the step to use the machine.

✓ So to understand how to use the machine, I always read the instructions and follow the steps to use the machine.

“step”应为复数“steps”，因为通常有多个步骤。

× Yes, I think reading the instructions is really necessary because it will save a lot of time and can avoid some potential dangerous or risks.

✓ Yes, I think reading the instructions is really necessary because it will save a lot of time and can avoid some potential dangers or risks.

“dangerous”是形容词，应改为名词“dangers”，与“risks”并列。

× For instance, I bought a coffee maker last year and I read the instruments to operate and wash it.

✓ For instance, I bought a coffee maker last year and I read the instructions to operate and clean it.

“instruments”应为“instructions”，表示说明书；“wash it”改为“clean it”更符合机器的清洁表达。