机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，例如“favorite mission”应为“favorite machine”，“automatic appearance”表达不清晰。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且句子结构要完整。

範例: My favorite machine at home is the sweeping robot because it cleans the floor automatically, which is very convenient and saves me a lot of time.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“a bowl of washing machine”不合适，句子结构混乱。建议使用正确的词汇和句型，表达观点时要条理清晰。

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in our daily life because they help keep our home clean and save a lot of time and effort.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子，如“use it the appearance quickly”表达不清楚。建议回答时注意句子完整性和逻辑性。

範例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine to make sure I operate it correctly and safely.

建議: 回答中存在重复词汇和表达不清晰的问题，如“need need not to”以及“compared to compressed instructions”不明确。建议使用简洁明了的句子表达观点。

範例: I think it depends. If the machine is easy to use, you might not need to read the instructions carefully. But for complex machines, reading the instructions is necessary to avoid mistakes.

× I would say the sweeping robot is my favorite mission at home because it is a automatic appearance and it can clean the floor. Convenient and free my hand.

✓ I would say the sweeping robot is my favorite machine at home because it has an automatic appearance and it can clean the floor. It is convenient and frees my hands.

句中'mission'应为'machine'，'a automatic appearance'应为'an automatic appearance'，'Convenient and free my hand'缺少主语和谓语，且'free my hand'应为'free my hands'。需要使用正确的冠词和完整句子结构。

× Yeah, I think a bowl of washing machine and sweeping machine are crucial, important in our daily life. They are all made, our family cleaned and convenient to use. It save me a amount.

✓ Yeah, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are crucial and important in our daily life. They help keep our family clean and are convenient to use. They save me a lot of time.

句中'a bowl of washing machine'不合适，应使用复数'washing machines'，'It save me a amount'主谓不一致且表达不完整，应为'They save me a lot of time'。需要注意单复数和主谓一致。

× Yes, I usually read the instructions before I use the machine to ensure I use it the appearance quickly and safely. For example if it Yeah.

✓ Yes, I usually read the instructions before I use the machine to ensure I use it properly and safely. For example, if it is necessary.

句中'use it the appearance'表达不正确，应为'use it properly'，'For example if it Yeah'不完整且无意义，应补充完整。需要正确使用介词和表达。

× Oh, I think it depends on the situation. If the machine is simply to operate, you need need not to read the instructions carefully. But compared to compressed instructions you must have to.

✓ Oh, I think it depends on the situation. If the machine is simple to operate, you need not read the instructions carefully. But for complicated instructions, you must read them carefully.

句中'depends on the situation'正确，'you need need not to read'重复且错误，应为'you need not read'，'compared to compressed instructions you must have to'表达不清，应改为'for complicated instructions, you must read them carefully'。需要正确使用情态动词和表达。