机器— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
What is your favourite machine in your home?
考生
In my home, my favorite machine is television because I enjoy watching movies on it, and watching movies can make me really relaxed.
考官
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
考生
Yes, I think both washing machines and a sweeping machines are really important because it can helps me a lot and I can benefit from it.
考官
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
考生
No, I don't read the instructions before using machines because I think the words is too long for me. I sometimes using machine from my own experience.
考官
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
考生
I think that it is really important to read the instructions because instructions can help us quickly know the technologies and we can use it frequently.
評估
總分
文法
× Yes, I think both washing machines and a sweeping machines are really important because it can helps me a lot and I can benefit from it.
✓ Yes, I think both washing machines and a sweeping machine are really important because they can help me a lot and I can benefit from them.
这里'sweeping machines'和'a sweeping machines'的单复数不一致，应该是单数形式'sweeping machine'。另外，'it can helps'中'helps'应为原形'help'，且主语是复数，应该用复数代词'they'和动词'help'。最后，'it'应改为复数代词'them'。
× Yes, I think both washing machines and a sweeping machines are really important because it can helps me a lot and I can benefit from it.
✓ Yes, I think both washing machines and a sweeping machine are really important because they can help me a lot and I can benefit from them.
动词'helps'错误地加了第三人称单数的-s，实际主语是复数，动词应为原形'help'。
× Yes, I think both washing machines and a sweeping machines are really important because it can helps me a lot and I can benefit from it.
✓ Yes, I think both washing machines and a sweeping machine are really important because they can help me a lot and I can benefit from them.
代词'it'用于复数名词时不正确，应使用复数代词'they'和'them'。
× No, I don't read the instructions before using machines because I think the words is too long for me.
✓ No, I don't read the instructions before using machines because I think the words are too long for me.
主语'the words'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，而不是单数'is'。
× I sometimes using machine from my own experience.
✓ I sometimes use machines from my own experience.
'using'在此处用法错误，应使用动词原形'use'，且'machine'应为复数形式'machines'以符合语境。
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