机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Améliorez la fluidité et la précision de votre réponse en évitant les erreurs grammaticales et en utilisant des phrases complètes. Par exemple, évitez les erreurs comme "Because leave living in Taiwan" et utilisez des expressions plus naturelles pour décrire le climat et l'effet de la climatisation.

範例: My favorite machine at home is the air conditioner. Since I live in Taiwan, where the weather is often hot and humid, the AC helps me feel comfortable by cooling the air and reducing humidity.

建議: Travaillez sur la structure de vos phrases et la grammaire pour rendre votre réponse plus claire et naturelle. Par exemple, évitez les erreurs comme "It's all mostly my mom do the all the chores" et utilisez des phrases complètes avec des liens logiques entre les idées.

範例: I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important at home. Since my mother does most of the chores, and I am often busy studying, these machines help save time and make cleaning easier.

建議: Améliorez la cohérence et la fluidité en évitant les phrases incomplètes et en utilisant des mots au pluriel quand c'est nécessaire. Par exemple, dites "instructions" au lieu de "instruction" et combinez les phrases courtes pour plus de fluidité.

範例: I usually go with the flow and don't read the instructions. If a machine is well designed, it should be easy to find the right buttons and use it without problems.

建議: Améliorez la grammaire et la clarté en utilisant des phrases complètes et en corrigeant les erreurs comme "do understand" et "it's it's product". Utilisez des mots au pluriel quand nécessaire et clarifiez vos idées pour une meilleure compréhension.

範例: Although I don't usually read the instructions, I think it is important to understand them because they reflect the designer's ideas. The designer knows the product best, so following the instructions can help you use it correctly.

× Because leave living in Taiwan, you have to pay attention for the temperature.

✓ Because living in Taiwan, you have to pay attention to the temperature.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used after 'pay attention'. The correct preposition is 'to'. The phrase should be 'pay attention to the temperature'.

× It's all mostly my mom do the all the chores, so I often studying.

✓ It's mostly my mom who does all the chores, so I am often studying.

The verb 'do' does not agree with the singular subject 'my mom'. It should be 'does'. Also, 'I often studying' is incorrect; it should be 'I am often studying' to indicate ongoing action.

× I don't really read instruction because if it's a good design, it should be easy for me to find all the right button and it'll be handy.

✓ I don't really read instructions because if it's a good design, it should be easy for me to find all the right buttons and it'll be handy.

The noun 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple steps or guidelines. Also, 'button' should be plural 'buttons' to match 'all the right'.

× So I don't usually read the instruction, it's unnecessary.

✓ So I don't usually read the instructions; it's unnecessary.

The noun 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple guidelines. Also, a semicolon is better to separate the two independent clauses.

× Although I don't read the instruction, I'll say it's crucial for you to do understand those instruction because it's the designers idea for you to follow and it's it's product.

✓ Although I don't read the instructions, I'll say it's crucial for you to understand those instructions because it's the designer's idea for you to follow and it's their product.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Designers' should be possessive 'designer's'. 'Do understand' is incorrect; it should be 'understand'. Also, 'it's it's product' is incorrect; it should be 'it's their product'.