机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答内容较好，表达了原因和效果，但句子结构稍显简单，且“air conditioner”前缺少冠词，建议注意冠词使用，并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner. Especially during the hot summers in Taiwan, it helps me stay cool and comfortable, which is very important because the weather can be unbearably hot.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“can helps”应为“can help”，且“convenience”用词不当，应为“convenient”。建议加强语法准确性，并丰富理由说明。

範例: I think washing machines are very important because they help people clean clothes quickly and conveniently. However, sweeping machines are less necessary since manual cleaning can be sufficient in some cases.

建議: 回答表达清晰，但“new advices”用词不当，应为“new devices”或“new appliances”。建议注意词汇准确性，并尝试使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions carefully before using a machine because I am not confident with new devices. For example, when I buy a new kitchen appliance, I follow the manual step by step to avoid making mistakes.

建議: 回答内容完整且逻辑清晰，表达了原因和例子。建议可以尝试使用更多连接词如“therefore”或“so”来增强句子连贯性。

範例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions first because electrical appliances can be quite complicated. Therefore, if we don't understand how to use them properly, it might cause damage or even be dangerous.

× I think the washing machine can helps people to clean garments really fast and convenience

✓ I think the washing machine can help people to clean garments really fast and conveniently

动词help在第三人称单数形式中，情态动词can后面应使用动词原形help，而不是helps。此外，convenience是名词，句中应使用副词conveniently来修饰动词clean。

× I think the washing machine can helps people to clean garments really fast and convenience

✓ I think the washing machine can help people to clean garments really fast and conveniently

这里需要用副词conveniently来修饰动词clean，而不是形容词convenience。

× the sweeping machines, I think it's not really important or necessary

✓ the sweeping machines, I think they are not really important or necessary

sweeping machines是复数，代词应使用they而不是it，且谓语动词应与复数主语一致。