机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid repetition and make your answer more natural by using varied vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. For example, instead of repeating 'to do coffee', say 'make coffee'. Also, add a linking phrase to explain why you like it.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the coffee machine because I enjoy making coffee, and the aroma always makes me feel happy.

建議: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about the machines' functions. Avoid vague phrases like 'anything' and use correct verbs such as 'wash' instead of 'watch'.

範例: Yes, washing machines and dishwashers are very important because they help us clean clothes and dishes efficiently, saving time and effort.

建議: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary for clarity. Use linking words to explain your process logically. For example, use 'however' to contrast your usual method with exceptions.

範例: I usually watch a YouTube video to learn how to use a machine; however, if I don't understand it, I refer to the instruction manual that comes with the product.

建議: Work on vocabulary accuracy and sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain reasons clearly. For example, use 'otherwise' to show consequences of not reading instructions.

範例: Yes, it is important to read the instructions carefully; otherwise, the machine might break down and become unusable, which wastes time and money.

× My favorite machine is a coffee machine because I like to do to do coffee and I feel happy when I smell the coffee.

✓ My favorite machine is a coffee machine because I like making coffee and I feel happy when I smell the coffee.

The phrase 'to do to do coffee' is incorrect. The correct form is 'making coffee' using the verb in the present participle form to express the activity you enjoy.

× Yeah, almost every house have one of this because washing machine, we can watch our clothes, jacket, anything and would keep it clean and dishes, dishwasher, we can wash our dishes, glass, anything.

✓ Yeah, almost every house has one of these because with a washing machine, we can wash our clothes, jackets, anything and keep them clean, and with a dishwasher, we can wash our dishes, glasses, anything.

The subject 'every house' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'one of this' should be 'one of these' to match plural form. 'Watch' is incorrect; it should be 'wash'. 'Glass' should be plural 'glasses' to match 'dishes'.

× In the past I read but no no, I only open a video on YouTube and see how we can do it and listen the interactions.

✓ In the past I read, but now I only open a video on YouTube and see how we can do it and listen to the instructions.

The verb 'open' and 'see' should be in present tense to match the current habit. Also, 'listen the interactions' is incorrect; it should be 'listen to the instructions'.

× But sometimes I don't understand the video so I will pack to the instruction in the paper of the box.

✓ But sometimes I don't understand the video, so I will refer to the instructions in the paper inside the box.

The phrase 'pack to the instruction' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'refer to the instructions'. Also, 'in the paper of the box' should be 'in the paper inside the box'.

× Yeah, it is important because if we don't read the interaction very well, maybe the machine will get off and we can use it anymore.

✓ Yeah, it is important because if we don't read the instructions very well, maybe the machine will break down and we cannot use it anymore.

'Interaction' is incorrect; it should be 'instructions'. 'Get off' is not appropriate here; 'break down' is better. 'Can use it anymore' should be 'cannot use it anymore'.

× And to save the machine, to save the time, we should read the inspection, we don't lose anything.

✓ And to save the machine and save time, we should read the instructions so we don't lose anything.

'Inspection' is incorrect; it should be 'instructions'. Also, 'to save the time' is better as 'save time'. The sentence is improved by connecting ideas properly.