机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复表达“我可以负担得起”和“它很有用”，并且注意语法错误，如“help me a lot”应为“helps me a lot”。建议回答时直接说明喜欢的原因，并用连词连接细节。

範例: My favorite machine at home is the vacuum cleaner because it helps me keep the floor clean effortlessly. I bought it for about CN¥300, which was quite affordable, and it saves me a lot of time and energy.

建議: 回答缺乏连贯性和逻辑性，表达不够自然，且出现语法错误和不完整句子。建议使用连词连接观点和理由，避免口语化和不完整表达。

範例: Yes, I think washing and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort. For example, I use a sweeping machine to clean my floor since I prefer to relax during my free time.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够简洁自然。建议直接回答问题，使用正确的时态和结构，并用连词连接句子。

範例: Usually, I don't read the instructions because I prefer to figure out how to use the machine myself. However, if it seems complicated, I will read the manual to understand it better.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“before you using”应为“before using”，表达稍显重复。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连词连接句子，使回答更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I believe it's important to read the instructions before using a machine to understand how it works. However, if the machine is very simple, reading the manual might not be necessary.

× I prefer to using it by myself and sometimes if it's too difficult I will read it.

✓ I prefer to use it by myself and sometimes if it's too difficult I will read it.

动词prefer后面接不定式时，应该用动词原形use，而不是动名词using。

× before you using a machine, you need to read the instruction to understand how to use it, how to combine it.

✓ before you use a machine, you need to read the instructions to understand how to use it, how to combine it.

介词before后面应接动词原形use，而不是动名词using；instruction应为复数instructions，因为通常说明书是多条内容。

× I purchased it about CN¥300 and it's not expensive for me.

✓ I purchased it for about CN¥300 and it's not expensive for me.

表示价格时，动词purchased后应加介词for，表示“花费了大约300元”。

× Tomorrow me time.

✓ Tomorrow is my time.

句子缺少谓语动词，且me应改为my，表示“明天是我的时间”。

× I think it's very useful and help me a lot.

✓ I think it's very useful and helps me a lot.

主语it是第三人称单数，谓语动词help应加-s，变为helps。