机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中表达了观点，但语言不够自然，且有语法错误，如“if we do not have air conditioner, I will be dead”不符合英语习惯。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法准确性。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because summers in Shanghai are extremely hot. Without it, I would feel very uncomfortable and find it hard to stay cool.

建議: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在较多错误，且内容不够具体。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Of course, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time. When I use them, I feel relaxed since I don't have to do these chores by hand.

建議: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，如“may not see the instruct instructions”不自然。建议使用更准确的表达，并注意时态和单复数。

範例: It depends on the machine. If I am familiar with it, I usually don't read the instructions. However, if it's a new machine, I always read the instructions carefully.

建議: 回答内容重复且表达不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并用更准确的表达说明理由。

範例: Yes, I think reading instructions is important because they help me solve problems if the machine doesn't work properly. Also, if I forget how to use it, the instructions remind me.

× if we do not have air conditioner, I will be dead in the hot weather.

✓ if we do not have an air conditioner, I will be dead in the hot weather.

这里“air conditioner”是可数名词，表示一个具体的空调设备，缺少冠词“an”导致单复数错误。应加冠词使其符合语法。

× washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

✓ washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

此句中“sweeping machines”应为“sweeping machines”或更常用的“vacuum cleaners”，但从语法角度看复数形式正确，无需修改。

× they are both time effectiveness machine

✓ they are both time-effective machines

“machine”应为复数形式“machines”，且“time effectiveness”应改为形容词短语“time-effective”修饰machines。

× they are both time effectiveness machine

✓ they are both time-effective machines

“time effectiveness”是名词短语，需用形容词“time-effective”来修饰名词“machines”，以符合英语表达习惯。

× Then I wash hands which wash clothes by hand.

✓ Then I wash clothes by hand.

“which wash clothes by hand”结构不正确，且“wash hands”与上下文不符，应直接表达“我用手洗衣服”。

× If this machine I was really familiar with, I may not see the instruct instructions,

✓ If I am really familiar with this machine, I may not read the instructions,

条件句中应使用现在时态“am”而非过去时“was”，且“see the instruct instructions”表达不当，应改为“read the instructions”。

× I may not see the instruct instructions,

✓ I may not read the instructions,

“instruct instructions”重复且不正确，应简化为“instructions”，且“see”应改为“read”更符合语境。

× if I do not use this machine before, I will read the instructions.

✓ if I have not used this machine before, I will read the instructions.

条件句中表示过去经验应使用现在完成时“have not used”，而非一般现在时“do not use”。

× if the machines have some mistakes, I can find solutions on the instructions.

✓ if the machines have some problems, I can find solutions in the instructions.

“mistakes”通常指人为错误，机器故障应用“problems”；且“on the instructions”应改为“in the instructions”，表示在说明书里面。

× I can find solutions on the instructions.

✓ I can find solutions in the instructions.

“instructions”是书面材料，正确介词应为“in”，表示“在说明书里”。

× And besides, if I forgot how to use the machine, I also can use. I also can find also on the instructions.

✓ And besides, if I forget how to use the machine, I can also find the instructions.

句子结构混乱，缺少宾语，且时态不一致，应调整为“if I forget... I can also find the instructions”，使句子完整通顺。