机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và tránh các lỗi như 'But and'. Hãy thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng ý với các chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine. In the past, I had to wash my clothes by hand, which was very tiring. However, now I just put the clothes into the washing machine and wait, which saves me a lot of time and effort. I find it very convenient and definitely worth the money I spent on it.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và dễ hiểu hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp các chi tiết cụ thể, tránh lỗi từ vựng như 'scraping machine' thay vì 'sweeping machine'.

範例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in many households. For example, washing machines help clean clothes thoroughly, while sweeping machines make cleaning floors more efficient. They both save a significant amount of time and effort compared to doing these tasks manually.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ phù hợp. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn lý do bạn đọc hướng dẫn sử dụng.

範例: Yes, it depends on the machine. If the machine is very complicated, I always read the instructions carefully because I worry about making mistakes or damaging it. Reading the manual helps me understand how to use the machine properly.

建議: Bạn cần tránh lặp từ và sử dụng thì đúng trong câu. Hãy nói rõ hơn về tầm quan trọng của việc đọc hướng dẫn và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions. When we buy a new machine and don't know how to use it, reading the manual carefully helps us avoid mistakes and ensures we use the machine correctly.

× In the past I need to wash my clothes with my own hands, but nowadays with the washing machine, I just need to put it in the machine and wait.

✓ In the past I needed to wash my clothes with my own hands, but nowadays with the washing machine, I just need to put them in the machine and wait.

The verb 'need' should be in the past tense 'needed' to match the past time reference 'In the past'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to correctly refer to the plural noun 'clothes'.

× But and I think it's very convenient and worth my money.

✓ And I think it's very convenient and worth my money.

The phrase 'But and' is incorrect; only one conjunction should be used. Here, 'And' is appropriate to continue the thought.

× Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in more than households.

✓ Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in more than just households.

The phrase 'in more than households' is unclear and incorrect. Adding 'just' clarifies the meaning that their importance extends beyond households.

× For example, washing machine into the clothes are clean while scraping machine help maintain cleaners even efficiently so that they set a significant amount of time and effort compared to.

✓ For example, washing machines make clothes clean while sweeping machines help maintain cleanliness efficiently, saving a significant amount of time and effort.

The original sentence has multiple structural errors and unclear phrases. Correcting verb forms, plural nouns, and sentence flow improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, it's depends on the machine.

✓ Yes, it depends on the machine.

The auxiliary verb 'does' is missing; 'depends' should not be preceded by 'it's'. The correct form is 'it depends'.

× Well, well if the machines are very complicated, I will with the instructions because I worry about mess up and maybe it's can explore something if I doing something stupid.

✓ Well, if the machines are very complicated, I will follow the instructions because I worry about messing up and maybe it can explode if I do something stupid.

The phrase 'I will with the instructions' is incomplete; 'follow' is needed. 'Mess up' should be 'messing up' as a gerund. 'It's can explore' is incorrect; it should be 'it can explode'. 'If I doing' should be 'if I do'.

× Yes, it is very important to read the instructions because when we when we buy a new machines and don't know how to use it, we need to read the instruction very careful so that we cannot mess up anything that I said.

✓ Yes, it is very important to read the instructions because when we buy new machines and don't know how to use them, we need to read the instructions very carefully so that we do not mess up anything.

'A new machines' is incorrect; 'machines' is plural and should not have 'a'. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Very careful' should be the adverb 'very carefully'. 'Cannot mess up anything that I said' is awkward and corrected to 'do not mess up anything'.