机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to start your answer with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, improve grammar and sentence structure for clarity.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the food grinder because I use it every day for cooking. It helps me grind food properly, which makes cooking easier and faster.

建議: Focus on giving a clear opinion with supporting reasons. Use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent and easy to understand.

範例: I think washing and sweeping machines are important because they save time and effort. Although we can do these tasks manually, machines make the work much easier and faster.

建議: Try to use simpler and clearer sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrases. Also, correct grammar mistakes for better clarity.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me avoid mistakes and use the machine correctly.

建議: Make your answer more natural by using correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because they make it easier to use the machine properly and help us keep it clean and well-maintained.

× My favorite machine is because I mean every day for cooking purpose.

✓ My favorite machine is the one I use every day for cooking purposes.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject complement after 'is' and has awkward phrasing. The correction provides a clear subject complement and corrects 'cooking purpose' to the plural 'cooking purposes' to express general use.

× It's help me to grind the food very properly and make it easy for the cooking.

✓ It helps me to grind the food very properly and makes cooking easier.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject. The phrase 'make it easy for the cooking' is awkward; 'makes cooking easier' is clearer.

× I think it's not important rather than other other machines because everyone else can makes sweeping and washing as an everyday we have used our clothes and that day only we have to wash our bus things.

✓ I think it's not as important as other machines because everyone can sweep and wash every day; we use our clothes daily and wash them on that day only.

'Makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural subject 'everyone else' (treated as plural here). The phrase 'rather than other other machines' is incorrect; 'not as important as other machines' is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Absolutely, when I use the machine before that I use this guide how to use this machine because it's quite important for me to eliminate my wrongness and use the machine very correctly and appropriately.

✓ Absolutely, before I use the machine, I read the guide on how to use it because it's quite important for me to avoid mistakes and use the machine correctly and appropriately.

The phrase 'when I use the machine before that' is awkward; 'before I use the machine' is correct. 'Use this guide how to use this machine' is incorrect; 'read the guide on how to use it' is correct. 'Eliminate my wrongness' is unnatural; 'avoid mistakes' is better.

× Absolutely we have to read these in instructions that helps help us to make easy process to how to use this machine and also we have keep our machine very neat and tidy.

✓ Absolutely, we have to read these instructions because they help us to make the process of using this machine easier, and we also have to keep our machine very neat and tidy.

'Helps help' is redundant; only 'help' is needed. 'Make easy process to how to use this machine' is incorrect; 'make the process of using this machine easier' is correct. 'We have keep' should be 'we have to keep' to express obligation.