机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构简单且有重复，缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并用连接词使回答更流畅。

範例: My favorite machine at home is the robot vacuum cleaner because it efficiently cleans dust from the floor. Moreover, it is very convenient and helps keep my living space tidy without much effort.

建議: 回答缺少对洗衣机重要性的评价，内容不够全面。句子结构简单，表达不够自然。建议直接回答问题并提供具体理由，使用连接词使内容连贯。

範例: Yes, I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are important. For example, sweeping machines save a lot of time by cleaning large floors quickly, allowing me to focus on other tasks.

建議: 回答表达较为重复，语法和用词不够准确。建议简化表达，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because they help me understand its functions and operate it correctly.

建議: 回答中出现语法错误和句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议注意句子完整性，避免重复，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Yes, reading instructions is important. For instance, when I bought a robot vacuum cleaner, the instructions helped me set it up correctly, saving a lot of time.

× My favorite machine is robot vacuum cleaner.

✓ My favorite machine is a robot vacuum cleaner.

此处缺少冠词“a”，因为“robot vacuum cleaner”是可数名词单数，前面需要加不定冠词。

× Its function is cleaning floor with dust.

✓ Its function is to clean the floor of dust.

“function is”后面应接不定式“to clean”，而不是动名词“cleaning”。另外，“floor”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特定的地板。

× Its function is cleaning floor with dust.

✓ Its function is cleaning the floor with dust.

“floor”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特定的地板。

× It is convenient and practical for us to clean my room.

✓ It is convenient and practical for us to clean our room.

前文使用“us”，后文应保持一致，使用“our”而非“my”，保持人称一致。

× Well, I personally prefer sweeping machines. It can clean the larger floors which saves a lot of time and effort for myself.

✓ Well, I personally prefer sweeping machines. They can clean larger floors which save a lot of time and effort for me.

“sweeping machines”是复数，代词应使用“they”，动词也应用复数形式“save”。“myself”用法不当，应改为“me”。

× I have a lot of time to do myself things.

✓ I have a lot of time to do my own things.

“myself things”表达错误，应使用“my own things”表示“我自己的事情”。

× I think instruction is very useful and convenient for me to better use the machine.

✓ I think the instruction is very useful and convenient for me to better use the machine.

“instruction”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特定的说明书。

× We know about the machine functions and know about how to use it.

✓ We know about the machine's functions and know how to use it.

“machine functions”应加所有格“machine's”，且“know about how to use it”表达不自然，应改为“know how to use it”。

× For example, I buy a robot vacuum cleaner and the instructions showed me how to set it up properly which saved me a lot of time and the instructions because.

✓ For example, I bought a robot vacuum cleaner, and the instructions showed me how to set it up properly, which saved me a lot of time.

时态应统一为过去时“bought”。句子结构混乱，去掉多余的“and the instructions because”，并用逗号分隔从句，使句子通顺。