机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了意思，但存在语法错误和重复用词，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用，避免重复词汇，并且使句子更简洁自然。

範例: My favorite machine at home is the air conditioner because it keeps the room cool and comfortable during the hot summer in Guangdong.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且“sweeping machines”与“sewing machine”混淆。建议理清问题，准确表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

範例: I think washing machines are very important because they save us a lot of time compared to washing clothes by hand. However, sweeping machines are less essential since we can clean floors manually.

建議: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，句子结构不够流畅。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用连词使表达更连贯。

範例: Certainly, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me use it properly and discover functions I might not know about.

建議: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词存在错误。建议理清思路，使用正确的语法和词汇，表达更具体的理由。

範例: Yes, I think reading instructions is important because they explain how to use the machine efficiently and help you avoid mistakes.

× my favorite machine is air conditioner which can provide me a a comfortable surroundings.

✓ my favorite machine is the air conditioner which can provide me a comfortable surrounding.

这里的“air conditioner”前面需要加定冠词“the”，因为特指家里的空调；“surroundings”是复数，但前面有不定冠词“a”，应改为单数形式“surrounding”。

× it re reduce to waste our time to wash the clothes by our hands

✓ it reduces the time we waste washing clothes by hand

“re reduce”是错误的表达，应为“reduces”；“to waste our time to wash the clothes by our hands”表达不自然，改为“the time we waste washing clothes by hand”更符合英语习惯。

× for the sewing machine I think it's not really important since that you can just by yourself.

✓ for the sewing machine I think it's not really important since you can just do it by yourself.

“since that you can just by yourself”中“by”用错，且缺少动词，应改为“do it by yourself”。

× reading the instruction before I use the machine can can help me to make a good use of this machine

✓ reading the instructions before I use the machine can help me to make good use of this machine

“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”，且“can can”重复，应去掉一个“can”；“make a good use”中“a”不需要。

× maybe some maybe some function that I don't know I can find it in the instruction.

✓ maybe some functions that I don't know I can find in the instructions.

“function”应为复数“functions”，“instruction”应为复数“instructions”；“find it”中“it”多余，应去掉。

× Instructions, well, I think it's really important because instruction is for the machine

✓ Instructions, well, I think they're really important because instructions are for the machine

“instruction”应为复数“instructions”，且主谓一致，改为“they're”和“instructions are”。

× maybe there are some more efficient or inconvenient function that you don't know

✓ maybe there are some more efficient or inconvenient functions that you don't know

“function”应为复数“functions”，因为前面用了“some”。

× but this instruction can tell you so, so you get some more function.

✓ but these instructions can tell you, so you get some more functions.

“instruction”应为复数“instructions”，“function”应为复数“functions”，且“so, so”重复，应去掉一个。