机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点并给出了理由，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“refresh”应为“fresh”。建议注意动词形式和形容词的正确使用，同时可以增加连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: My favorite machine at home is definitely the refrigerator because it keeps fruits and other food fresh for a long time, especially during the hot summer months. Moreover, it provides cold drinks, which are very refreshing when the weather is warm.

建議: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但“housework load”应为“housework load”或“housework burden”，且“potential dispute”前应加冠词。建议注意词汇搭配和冠词使用，提升表达准确性。

範例: Yes, I firmly believe that washing and sweeping machines are very important in my family because they significantly reduce our housework burden, allowing us to have more free time. In addition, they help to prevent potential disputes over who should do these chores.

建議: 回答中出现了矛盾（“No, I really read”），影响表达清晰。建议注意句子逻辑和语法，避免自相矛盾，同时使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: No, I usually do not read the instructions before using a machine because I prefer to figure things out on my own. I often forget to read them, and I find that searching for information online is usually quicker and more helpful. Besides, I believe reading instructions can be time-consuming, so I prefer learning through experience.

建議: 回答表达了观点，但“always inclined”应为“am always inclined”或“always incline to”，语法不完整。建议注意主谓一致和时态使用，提升语法准确性。

範例: I don't think reading instructions is very important. If something goes wrong with a machine, I am always inclined to post my questions on the Internet rather than reading through the instructions. This way, I can get quick answers to my specific concerns.

× It is especially useful during the hot summer months because it keeps the fruit and other food refresh for a long time.

✓ It is especially useful during the hot summer months because it keeps the fruit and other food fresh for a long time.

这里“refresh”是动词形式，但句中需要形容词“fresh”来修饰“fruit and other food”，表示“新鲜的”。应使用形容词形式。

× No, I really read the instructions before using a machine because I tend to figure things out on my own.

✓ No, I don't really read the instructions before using a machine because I tend to figure things out on my own.

句中缺少否定词“don't”，导致意思与上下文不符。正确表达是否定句，表示“不，我不经常阅读说明书”。

× If something goes wrong with the machine, I always inclined to post my questions on the Internet rather than reading through the instructions.

✓ If something goes wrong with the machine, I am always inclined to post my questions on the Internet rather than reading through the instructions.

“inclined”是形容词，前面需要有系动词“am”来构成谓语，缺少“am”导致句子结构不完整。