机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答结构清晰，内容具体，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅自然。例如，可以用“because”或“so”来连接句子，使逻辑更紧密。

範例: My favorite machine at home is my laptop because it is essential for both work and entertainment. For instance, I use it to complete my assignments, and I also watch movies or play games on it during my spare time. Therefore, without it, I would feel quite bored and unproductive.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议注意主谓一致和单复数形式，同时避免重复和冗余。可以简化句子并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and effort. Without these machines, people would have to wash clothes and clean the house by themselves, which can be tiring and time-consuming.

建議: 回答内容具体且结构合理，但可以增加更多连接词如“and”或“so”来增强句子之间的连贯性，使表达更自然。

範例: Yes, I usually like to read the instructions before using a machine because they provide important safety information and explain how to operate it correctly. For example, reading the manual helps me avoid mistakes and ensures that I use the machine safely and efficiently.

建議: 回答内容完整，但“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”，同时可以使用更多连接词如“because”或“so”来增强逻辑性。

範例: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because when people use a machine for the first time, they often don't know how to start it. For example, if they try to use it without reading the manual, it can be dangerous and may cause an accident.

× He has a bunch of washing machine and a sleeping machine are very important because they are save a lot of time and effort.

✓ He has a bunch of washing machines and a sweeping machine, which are very important because they save a lot of time and effort.

这里“washing machine”应为复数形式“washing machines”，因为前面用了“a bunch of”，表示很多；“sleeping machine”应为“sweeping machine”，是拼写错误；“are save”应改为“save”，因为主语是复数，谓语动词用复数形式。

× He has a bunch of washing machine and a sleeping machine are very important because they are save a lot of time and effort.

✓ He has a bunch of washing machines and a sweeping machine, which are very important because they save a lot of time and effort.

句中缺少连接词“which”来连接两个分句，使句子结构完整。

× Without this machine, people would have to wash clothes and clean the house on their own which can be tiring and time consuming.

✓ Without these machines, people would have to wash clothes and clean the house on their own, which can be tiring and time consuming.

前文提到多个机器，故“this machine”应改为复数“these machines”，保持前后呼应。

× I think it is very important to read the instruction because when people use the machine for the first time, they often don't know how to start it.

✓ I think it is very important to read the instructions because when people use the machine for the first time, they often don't know how to start it.

“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”，表示说明书的内容，符合习惯用法。