机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu bhul ache, jemon 'mission' er bodole 'machine' bola uchit. Apni bhalo kore proshner uttor dite paren jodi prothome spasto vabe bolen je apnar priyo machine ta ki, tarpor tar karon shoho kichu details den. English e 'because' diye karon bolte paren, ebong sentence gulo shohoje bujhte parben emon vabe gathan korun.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the IPS because it provides electricity when the main power goes off. It helps us continue our work without interruption during power cuts.

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu bhul ache, jemon 'sweeping machine' er bodole 'vacuum cleaner' bola bhalo hobe. Apni proshner uttor spasto vabe den ebong linking words babohar kore sentence gulo ke logically jorun. Apni kichu specific karon dite paren jemon 'washing machine saves time' ebong 'vacuum cleaner keeps the house clean'.

範例: I think washing machines are very important because they save a lot of time when washing clothes. Although I am not familiar with sweeping machines, I believe vacuum cleaners are useful to keep the house clean.

建議: Apnar uttor e kichu bhul ache, jemon 'competitive' er bodole 'complicated' bola uchit. Apni uttor ke aro spasto ebong shundor vabe gathan korun. Linking words babohar kore uttor ke logical korun ebong proshner uttor spasto bhabe din.

範例: Sometimes I read the instructions before using a machine, especially if it is complicated. Otherwise, I try to use it based on my experience.

建議: Apnar uttor e onek obossoi confusion ache. Apni proshner uttor spasto vabe den ebong kichu specific karon den jemon 'reading instructions helps to understand how to use the machine safely and correctly'. Apni simple ebong clear sentence babohar korun.

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because they help us understand how to use the machine safely and correctly.

× My favorite mission in my home is probably IPS 'cause it gives us energy when the electricity goes off.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is probably the IPS because it gives us energy when the electricity goes off.

The word 'mission' is incorrect; it should be 'machine' to match the context. Also, 'IPS' likely refers to a singular device, so 'the IPS' is appropriate. This correction fixes the singular/plural and article usage.

× I don't know what is about sweeping machine but I know a washing machine is important because it save our time to wash our clothes.

✓ I don't know what a sweeping machine is, but I know a washing machine is important because it saves our time to wash our clothes.

The phrase 'what is about sweeping machine' is incorrect; it should be 'what a sweeping machine is'. Also, 'save' should be 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'washing machine'. This addresses singular/plural and subject-verb agreement.

× Sometime we have a weekend cloth remaining to wash them.

✓ Sometimes we have some weekend clothes remaining to wash.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Cloth' should be plural 'clothes' because it refers to multiple items. 'Remaining to wash them' is awkward; 'remaining to wash' is sufficient.

× If the machine is about very competitive, I don't think I can understand the machine.

✓ If the machine is very complicated, I don't think I can understand it.

'About very competitive' is incorrect; likely intended 'very complicated'. Also, avoid repeating 'the machine'; use 'it' instead. This fixes word choice and pronoun use.

× So I read the instruction of this machine.

✓ So I read the instructions of this machine.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because machines usually have multiple instructions.

× Yes, reading the instruction gives you an example, gives you an, gives you a topic about the machine.

✓ Yes, reading the instructions gives you an example and a topic about the machine.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. The phrase 'gives you an, gives you a topic' is awkward; combining with 'and' improves clarity.