机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and clear, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, instead of 'I'll able to make new dishes,' say 'I am able to prepare new dishes.' Also, avoid vague phrases like 'in a way.'

範例: My favourite machine at home is the microwave. It makes cooking easier and faster, allowing me to prepare various dishes like curries and steamed vegetables without losing their nutrients.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your sentences better and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. For example, instead of 'which savour a lot of time,' say 'which saves a lot of time.'

範例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are indispensable because they save time and make our daily chores easier. For instance, automatic washing machines clean clothes efficiently without manual effort.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'I'm really into reading' and complete your sentences properly. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using any new machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely and effectively. For example, when I get a new kitchen appliance, I read the manual to learn its functions and precautions.

建議: Your answer has good content but is grammatically incorrect and somewhat repetitive. Try to use clear and complete sentences, and avoid repeating phrases like 'operation technique.' Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I firmly believe that reading instructions is very important. It helps us understand how to operate appliances correctly and ensures our safety by informing us about necessary precautions.

× Well, there are various machines in my aboard that I use in my day-to-day life, but my favorite is definitely the microwave.

✓ Well, there are various machines in my abode that I use in my day-to-day life, but my favorite is definitely the microwave.

The word 'aboard' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'abode' which means home or residence. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but since it affects sentence meaning, it is corrected here.

× It has made my life much easier than the past because I'll able to make new dishes and cook some curries or vegetables which are in a way without losing their nutrients.

✓ It has made my life much easier than in the past because I am able to make new dishes and cook some curries or vegetables in a way that does not lose their nutrients.

The phrase 'I'll able' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I am able' or 'I'll be able'. Also, 'which are in a way without losing their nutrients' is awkward and ungrammatical; it is corrected to 'in a way that does not lose their nutrients' for clarity and correctness.

× Indeed, these are I believe that washing machines and sweeping machines are really indispensable in our daily life because they make our life more comfortable and time effective as we can use automatic machines for washing clothes a lot which savour a lot of time without manual interference and similarly.

✓ Indeed, I believe that washing machines and sweeping machines are really indispensable in our daily life because they make our life more comfortable and time-effective as we can use automatic machines for washing clothes, which save a lot of time without manual interference, and similarly for sweeping.

The original sentence has a confusing structure and misplaced phrases. 'These are I believe that' is incorrect; it should be 'I believe that'. 'Time effective' should be 'time-effective'. 'Savour' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'save'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Honestly speaking, I really into reading. I'm really into reading instructions before using any technological invention because it is really important.

✓ Honestly speaking, I am really into reading. I'm really into reading instructions before using any technological invention because it is really important.

The phrase 'I really into reading' is missing the verb 'am'. The correct form is 'I am really into reading'. This is an error in verb usage related to prepositions and auxiliary verbs.

× For example, whenever I use new kitchen appliance, I always try to read instruction and came to know about it that how to operate it and but precautions we should.

✓ For example, whenever I use a new kitchen appliance, I always try to read the instructions and learn how to operate it and what precautions we should take.

The phrase 'came to know about it that how to operate it and but precautions we should' is ungrammatical and awkward. 'Came' is past tense but the sentence is about habitual action, so 'learn' or 'come to know' in present tense is appropriate. Also, articles 'a' and 'the' are missing before 'new kitchen appliance' and 'instructions'. The sentence is corrected for tense, article usage, and clarity.

× Yes, I firmly believe that reading instruction should be the first priority of the individuals. Because my reading instruction, we came to know about the operation technique, the operation technique of the appliances and we can make ourselves safe by reading the precautions we can take.

✓ Yes, I firmly believe that reading instructions should be the first priority of individuals. Because by reading instructions, we come to know about the operation techniques of the appliances and we can keep ourselves safe by following the precautions.

'Reading instruction' should be plural 'reading instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines. 'The individuals' is better as 'individuals' without 'the' for generalization. 'Came' is past tense but the context is general, so 'come' is correct. 'Make ourselves safe' is awkward; 'keep ourselves safe' is better. The sentence is corrected for quantifier use, article use, tense, and clarity.