机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“extra function for drive clothes”应为“extra function for drying clothes”，且“all the bottom is very clear on the top of the machine”表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子结构，同时避免冗余。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine with a drying function. It is very convenient, especially during the wet season in Jiangsu province. I also find it easy to use because all the buttons are clearly labeled on the top panel.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯，且有重复“Of course”。建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并提供具体细节。

範例: Yes, washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because they help us maintain cleanliness easily. Nowadays, most households have these machines, and some washing machines even have special programs for different types of clothes.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“bottoms”应为“buttons”，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的表达。

範例: I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine because most machines today are designed to be user-friendly. The buttons and basic functions are clearly marked on the machine's surface.

建議: 回答表达较为清晰，但有语法错误，如“reading the instruction”应为“reading the instructions”，“trying to repairing”应为“trying to repair”。建议注意语法准确性，并避免口语填充词。

範例: I think reading the instructions is useful when you want to repair a machine or discover hidden functions. However, for basic daily use, detailed reading is usually unnecessary.

× I think it is the washing machine with extra function for drive clothes.

✓ I think it is the washing machine with an extra function for driving clothes.

这里“drive”应该用动名词形式“driving”，表示“洗衣机具有额外的功能，用于洗涤衣物”。动词后接动名词表示功能或用途。

× It would be very convenient especially in some wet season in Jiangsu province.

✓ It would be very convenient especially in the wet season in Jiangsu province.

“some wet season”不符合习惯表达，应使用特指的“the wet season”，表示江苏省的雨季。

× And I found it also very easy to use because all the bottom is very clear on the top of the machine.

✓ And I found it also very easy to use because all the buttons are very clear on the top of the machine.

“bottom”应为“buttons”，按钮；且“all the bottom is”主谓不一致，应为“all the buttons are”。

× Yes, of course, as they supported our fundamental daily requirements for keeping our clothes clean.

✓ Yes, of course, as they support our fundamental daily requirements for keeping our clothes clean.

此处描述的是现在的事实，应使用一般现在时“support”，而非过去时“supported”。

× Of course, I think every house nowadays have those kind of machines at their home and some of the ones the machines could support cleaning different kinds of clothes especially.

✓ Of course, I think every house nowadays has those kinds of machines at their home, and some of the machines can support cleaning different kinds of clothes especially.

“every house”是单数，谓语应为“has”；“those kind”应为复数“those kinds”；“some of the ones the machines”结构混乱，改为“some of the machines”；“could”改为“can”表示一般现在时能力。

× Well, I do not read the instructions before using machine because I think nowadays many machines were designed to be very user friendly as the bottoms and the basic functions would be applied very clear on the surface of the machine itself.

✓ Well, I do not read the instructions before using a machine because I think nowadays many machines are designed to be very user friendly as the buttons and the basic functions are clearly displayed on the surface of the machine itself.

“using machine”缺少冠词，应为“using a machine”；“were designed”应为现在时“are designed”；“bottoms”应为“buttons”；“would be applied very clear”表达错误，改为“are clearly displayed”。

× Well, I think reading the instruction would be very useful when you're trying to repairing a machine and discovering some hidden, uh, functions.

✓ Well, I think reading the instructions would be very useful when you're trying to repair a machine and discover some hidden, uh, functions.

“trying to repairing”结构错误，动词不定式后应接动词原形“repair”；“discovering”应与前面动作并列，改为“discover”。

× But there's no need to do a detailed reading when you trying to use some basic functions in your daily life.

✓ But there's no need to do a detailed reading when you are trying to use some basic functions in your daily life.

“you trying”缺少助动词，应为“you are trying”。