机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and clear, using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time. Before I had it, I used to wash clothes by hand, which was very tiring. Thanks to this machine, I can do laundry quickly and have more free time.

建議: Your answer covers the main idea but lacks coherence and has some grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect your points logically and try to be more specific with your examples. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas.

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save us a lot of time. For example, instead of spending hours cleaning, we can use that time to enjoy hobbies or spend quality moments with family and friends.

建議: Your answer is clear but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy. Also, provide a more complete answer with linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine because I already know how to operate them. Most machines are similar and user-friendly, so I can figure out how to use them easily.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by adding more supporting details and using linking words to make your response more coherent. Also, try to avoid repeating similar ideas and use a wider range of vocabulary.

範例: I believe reading instructions is not always necessary if you are familiar with the machine. Since many devices are designed to be user-friendly and similar, it's usually easy to understand how they work without reading the manual.

× I might pay a favorite machine in my home is washing machine because it saves my time so much.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because it saves me so much time.

The modal verb 'might' is incorrectly used here; the sentence should state a fact rather than possibility. Also, 'pay' is incorrect in this context. The correct sentence expresses a fact about the favorite machine, so modal verbs are unnecessary.

× I might pay a favorite machine in my home is washing machine because it saves my time so much.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because it saves me so much time.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'washing machine' because it refers to a specific machine known to both speaker and listener.

× because it saves my time so much.

✓ because it saves me so much time.

The pronoun 'my' is incorrectly used with 'time' here; the correct object pronoun 'me' should be used after 'saves'.

× I remember time when I didn't have washing machine and it was something terrible because I had to wash by my hands all the time.

✓ I remember the time when I didn't have a washing machine and it was terrible because I had to wash everything by hand all the time.

The sentence lacks the definite article 'the' before 'time' and the indefinite article 'a' before 'washing machine'. Also, 'wash by my hands' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'wash by hand' or 'wash everything by hand'.

× I remember time when I didn't have washing machine and it was something terrible because I had to wash by my hands all the time.

✓ I remember the time when I didn't have a washing machine and it was terrible because I had to wash everything by hand all the time.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'time' and the indefinite article 'a' before 'washing machine' to specify the noun properly.

× Thank and thanks to the God I have it.

✓ Thanks to God, I have it.

The phrase 'Thank and thanks to the God' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'Thanks to God'. Also, 'the God' is incorrect unless referring to a specific deity; here, 'God' without 'the' is standard.

× Washing machine, sweeping machines and another equipment.

✓ Washing machines, sweeping machines, and other equipment.

'Washing machine' should be plural to match 'sweeping machines'. 'Another equipment' is incorrect because 'equipment' is uncountable; 'other equipment' is correct.

× Modern technologies at home are really important because those all serves us and it saves our time.

✓ Modern technologies at home are really important because they all serve us and save our time.

'Those all serves' is incorrect; 'they all serve' is correct for plural subject. Also, 'it saves' should be 'save' to agree with plural subject 'technologies'.

× We can spend those time on a funny and good activities we like.

✓ We can spend that time on fun and good activities we like.

'Those time' is incorrect; 'time' is uncountable and should be 'that time'. 'A funny and good activities' is incorrect; 'activities' is plural, so 'fun and good activities' is correct without 'a'.

× We can spend this time with our friends and family and spend it on our career.

✓ We can spend this time with our friends and family and focus on our careers.

The phrase 'spend it on our career' is awkward; 'focus on our careers' is more natural. Also, 'career' should be plural to match 'our'.

× I don't use read instructions because I know how to use it.

✓ I don't read instructions because I know how to use it.

The phrase 'use read instructions' is incorrect; 'read instructions' is correct. The verb 'use' is unnecessary here.

× Most of them are alike, they are easy to use and of course they have at least small instruction on it.

✓ Most of them are alike; they are easy to use and, of course, have at least a small instruction manual.

'Instruction' is uncountable and usually used as 'instruction manual' or 'instructions'. Also, 'on it' is awkward; better to say 'have at least a small instruction manual'.

× So I don't read the papers.

✓ So I don't read the instructions.

'The papers' is vague; 'the instructions' is more precise and appropriate in this context.

× I don't think it's important to read instructions whenever you know how to use a machine because they tend to be quite similar and user friendly, so it's easy to figure out how they work.

✓ I don't think it's important to read instructions if you know how to use a machine because they tend to be quite similar and user-friendly, so it's easy to figure out how they work.

'Whenever' is incorrect here; 'if' is the correct conditional conjunction. Also, 'user friendly' should be hyphenated as 'user-friendly'.