机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and sentence structure. Try to use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Also, avoid redundancy and improve vocabulary by using phrases like 'many features' instead of 'lots of feature'.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it has many useful features that make washing clothes easier and save a lot of time and effort.

建議: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like 'stripping machine' and 'leads human efforts'. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important at home because they help to do household chores quickly and reduce the physical effort required, especially for mothers who usually manage these tasks.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical errors. Use proper verb forms and avoid redundancy. Also, organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

範例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because they provide important information on how to operate it safely and efficiently, including details about charging and maintenance.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to explain reasons logically. Avoid repeating the same idea multiple times.

範例: Yes, I believe it is important to read the instructions because if we do not follow them properly, the machine may get damaged due to incorrect use in the future.

× My favorite machine is washing machine at my home because of lots of feature at washing machine and it reduce human effort in washing clothes.

✓ My favorite machine is the washing machine at my home because of lots of features in the washing machine and it reduces human effort in washing clothes.

The sentence misses the definite article 'the' before 'washing machine' which is necessary when referring to a specific machine. 'Feature' should be plural 'features' to match 'lots of'. Also, 'reduce' should be 'reduces' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× My favorite machine is washing machine at my home because of lots of feature at washing machine and it reduce human effort in washing clothes.

✓ My favorite machine is the washing machine at my home because of lots of features in the washing machine and it reduces human effort in washing clothes.

The word 'feature' should be plural 'features' because it is preceded by 'lots of', which indicates more than one feature.

× My favorite machine is washing machine at my home because of lots of feature at washing machine and it reduce human effort in washing clothes.

✓ My favorite machine is the washing machine at my home because of lots of features in the washing machine and it reduces human effort in washing clothes.

The verb 'reduce' should be 'reduces' to agree with the singular subject 'it' referring to the washing machine.

× Yes, I think washing machine and stripping machine are important for home because it'll do a lot of work and also leads human efforts and it usually prefer to use at home by mothers.

✓ Yes, I think the washing machine and the sweeping machine are important for the home because they'll do a lot of work and also reduce human effort and are usually preferred to be used at home by mothers.

Definite articles 'the' are needed before 'washing machine' and 'sweeping machine' when referring to specific machines. 'Stripping machine' is corrected to 'sweeping machine' as likely intended. 'It'll' changed to 'they'll' to agree with plural subject. 'Leads human efforts' is incorrect; 'reduce human effort' is appropriate. 'Prefer to use' should be 'preferred to be used' to fit passive construction.

× Yes, I think washing machine and stripping machine are important for home because it'll do a lot of work and also leads human efforts and it usually prefer to use at home by mothers.

✓ Yes, I think the washing machine and the sweeping machine are important for the home because they'll do a lot of work and also reduce human effort and are usually preferred to be used at home by mothers.

The modal verb 'will' is used correctly but the pronoun and verb agreement need correction to match plural subject 'machines'.

× Yes, I think washing machine and stripping machine are important for home because it'll do a lot of work and also leads human efforts and it usually prefer to use at home by mothers.

✓ Yes, I think the washing machine and the sweeping machine are important for the home because they'll do a lot of work and also reduce human effort and are usually preferred to be used at home by mothers.

The subject is plural ('washing machine and sweeping machine'), so verbs and pronouns should be plural as well.

× Yes, usually everybody read instruction before using machine because it is provide a lot of information about the machine like how we can use this machine and how the machine is performed, about like about charging and also about machine.

✓ Yes, usually everybody reads the instructions before using a machine because it provides a lot of information about the machine, like how we can use this machine, how the machine operates, information about charging, and other details about the machine.

Prepositions 'before using machine' should be 'before using a machine'. 'Read instruction' should be 'reads the instructions' for subject-verb agreement and article use. 'It is provide' should be 'it provides'. 'How the machine is performed' is incorrect; 'how the machine operates' is better. 'About like about charging' is redundant and corrected to 'information about charging'.

× Yes, usually everybody read instruction before using machine because it is provide a lot of information about the machine like how we can use this machine and how the machine is performed, about like about charging and also about machine.

✓ Yes, usually everybody reads the instructions before using a machine because it provides a lot of information about the machine, like how we can use this machine, how the machine operates, information about charging, and other details about the machine.

The verb 'read' should be 'reads' to agree with singular subject 'everybody'. 'Provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× Yes, I think it is important to read the instruction because if we do not read the instruction of machine and instruments it think it will be damaged in future by some activities because we do not read instruction in at this times and it damage in future.

✓ Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because if we do not read the instructions of machines and instruments, I think they will be damaged in the future by some activities because we do not read instructions at this time and they get damaged in the future.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' when referring generally. 'Instruction of machine and instruments' should be 'instructions of machines and instruments'. 'It think' should be 'I think'. 'It will be damaged' changed to 'they will be damaged' to agree with plural subject. 'In future' should be 'in the future'. 'In at this times' corrected to 'at this time'. 'It damage' corrected to 'they get damaged' for subject-verb agreement and tense.

× Yes, I think it is important to read the instruction because if we do not read the instruction of machine and instruments it think it will be damaged in future by some activities because we do not read instruction in at this times and it damage in future.

✓ Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because if we do not read the instructions of machines and instruments, I think they will be damaged in the future by some activities because we do not read instructions at this time and they get damaged in the future.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used for plural nouns 'machines and instruments'; it should be 'they'. Also, 'it think' is incorrect; it should be 'I think'.