机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“the air condition”应为“the air conditioner”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子结构。

範例: My favorite machine at home is definitely the air conditioner because it keeps me cool during the hot summer holidays.

建議: 回答不够连贯且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议明确区分两种机器的重要性，并使用连词使句子更流畅。

範例: I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are important because the washing machine saves me a lot of time by cleaning clothes once a week, and the sweeping machine helps keep the floor clean easily.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“use the instructions”应为“read the instructions”，“carefully reading”应为“carefully read”，“avoid some addition”表达不清。建议注意时态和词汇准确性。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a new machine. For example, I bought a blender last week and carefully read the instructions to avoid any accidents.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，如“it's very important reading”应为“it's very important to read”，“she don't”应为“she doesn't”，且表达不够自然。建议使用正确的语法结构和更自然的表达。

範例: Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions before using a new machine. For example, my friend didn't read the instructions for her new coffee machine and accidentally spilled hot water everywhere.

× My favorite machine in my home is definitely the air condition because it can make me feel cool in during the summer holiday.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is definitely the air conditioner because it can make me feel cool during the summer holiday.

这里“in during”是错误的介词搭配，应去掉“in”只用“during”。另外，“air condition”应为“air conditioner”，这是词汇错误。

× I think they're both important for the washing machine.

✓ I think they're both important for washing machines.

这里“washing machine”应使用复数形式“washing machines”，因为前文提到的是“washing machines and sweeping machines”，指的是两种机器的总称。

× It can help me save huge amount of time, deal with the once a week, the clothes.

✓ It can help me save a huge amount of time and deal with the clothes once a week.

“huge amount of time”前应加冠词“a”；“once a week”位置错误，应放在“deal with the clothes”之后；句子结构不完整，需用连词“and”连接两个动作。

× I always use the instructions before using some new machine.

✓ I always read the instructions before using a new machine.

“use the instructions”表达不准确，应为“read the instructions”；“some new machine”应为“a new machine”，冠词使用错误。

× I buy a blender last week and before I use it I carefully reading the instruction.

✓ I bought a blender last week and before I used it I carefully read the instructions.

“buy”应使用过去式“bought”；“use”应使用过去式“used”；“reading”应改为动词原形“read”以符合句子结构；“instruction”应为复数“instructions”。

× It can help me avoid some addition.

✓ It can help me avoid some accidents.

“addition”用词错误，应为“accidents”，意思是避免意外。

× Yes, I think it's very important reading instructions before using a new machine.

✓ Yes, I think it's very important to read instructions before using a new machine.

“important”后应接不定式“to read”，而不是动名词“reading”。

× For example, my friends using a new coffee machine, she don't read the instructions and she sleeps hot water everywhere.

✓ For example, my friend used a new coffee machine, she didn't read the instructions and she spilled hot water everywhere.

“friends”应为单数“friend”与后文“she”对应；“using”应为过去式“used”；“don't”应为过去式“didn't”；“sleeps”用词错误，应为“spilled”，表示洒出。