机器— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
What is your favourite machine in your home?
考生
Uh, in our home, my favorite mission is toaster because it helps me a lot, especially in the morning when, uh, I'm in a rush and I need to, uh, leave home immediately. I make a toast, umm, and eat them. That's why it's so helpful for me.
考官
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
考生
Definitely yes, There are two of the machines which are so important, especially the washing machines because not everyone is able to wash their plates or glass in their daily life because of rough shadow. That's why I can say yes, they are so important.
考官
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
考生
Actually, no, I don't read anything because I usually just use toaster machine that we have in our house. But other machines are responsible for my mother and that's why she always uses that those machines and I think yes, she always reads them instruction of instructions of machine.
考官
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
考生
Usually it depends on the machines. Some machines are very complex and that's why we really need to read first instructions. But some machines are quite easy to operate. That's why you don't need to read anything, you just use it.
評估
總分
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
分數: 70.0建議: Cavabınızda təbii və aydın ifadələrdən istifadə edin, "mission" yerinə "machine" sözünü düzgün istifadə edin və söz təkrarlamalarından qaçının. Məsələn, "I make a toast, umm, and eat them" cümləsində "toast" tək olduğundan "eat it" daha uyğundur. Daha qısa və effektiv cümlələr qurmağa çalışın.
範例: My favourite machine at home is the toaster because it helps me prepare breakfast quickly, especially when I am in a hurry in the morning. I just make toast and eat it, which saves me a lot of time.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
分數: 60.0建議: Cümlələrinizdə məntiqi əlaqələr və düzgün söz seçimi vacibdir. "Rough shadow" ifadəsi mənasızdır, əvəzinə "busy schedule" və ya "lack of time" kimi ifadələr istifadə edin. Daha aydın və spesifik səbəblər verin və cümlələri daha sadə və düzgün qurun.
範例: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and effort, especially for people who have busy schedules and cannot clean everything by hand.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
分數: 65.0建議: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvləri düzəldin və sözləri düzgün formda istifadə edin. Məsələn, "toaster machine" sadəcə "toaster" olmalıdır. "Instruction of instructions of machine" ifadəsi səhvlidir, "instructions of the machines" daha düzgündür. Cümlələri daha qısa və aydın edin.
範例: Actually, I don't usually read the instructions because I only use the toaster at home. However, my mother uses other machines and she always reads the instructions carefully.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
分數: 75.0建議: Cümlələrinizdə daha düzgün qrammatika və ifadələrdən istifadə edin. Məsələn, "read first instructions" yerinə "read the instructions first" deyin. Daha təbii ifadələr və əlaqələndirici sözlər əlavə edin ki, cavabınız daha axıcı olsun.
範例: It usually depends on the machine. For complex machines, it is important to read the instructions first to use them properly. However, for simple machines, you can operate them without reading the instructions.
文法
× I make a toast, umm, and eat them.
✓ I make a toast, umm, and eat it.
The word 'toast' here is singular, so the pronoun referring to it should also be singular ('it') instead of plural ('them'). This ensures agreement between the noun and pronoun.
× There are two of the machines which are so important, especially the washing machines because not everyone is able to wash their plates or glass in their daily life because of rough shadow.
✓ There are two machines which are very important, especially the washing machines, because not everyone is able to wash their plates or glasses in their daily life because of rough water.
The phrase 'two of the machines' is incorrect; it should be 'two machines'. Also, 'glass' should be plural 'glasses' when referring to multiple items. The phrase 'rough shadow' seems incorrect and likely intended to be 'rough water' or similar; this should be clarified for meaning.
× But other machines are responsible for my mother and that's why she always uses that those machines and I think yes, she always reads them instruction of instructions of machine.
✓ But other machines are my mother's responsibility, and that's why she always uses those machines, and I think yes, she always reads the instructions of the machines.
The phrase 'are responsible for my mother' is incorrect; it should be 'are my mother's responsibility'. Also, 'that those machines' is redundant; 'those machines' is correct. 'Reads them instruction of instructions of machine' is incorrect; it should be 'reads the instructions of the machines'. Proper pronoun and article usage is necessary for clarity.
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