机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer wa sukoshi fukuzatsu de, bunpou to eigo no shizen-sa ni mondai ga arimasu. Tatoeba, 'if it's not exist' wa 'if it didn't exist' ni shita hou ga yoku, 'we are maybe die' wa 'we might die' to iu hou ga tadashii desu. Motto shizen de, rikai shi yasui kotoba wo tsukatte kudasai.

範例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it gets extremely hot in Japan. If we didn't have it, living here would be very difficult and uncomfortable.

建議: Kotae ga fukuzatsu de, bunpou to imi ga wakari nikui desu. 'Sleeping machines' wa 'sweeping machines' no koto deshou ka? Soshite, 'To use third, we can enough time' wa imi ga tsukanai node, motto meikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai. Rikai shi yasui you ni, riron to jissai no reigai wo tsukatte kudasai.

範例: I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help us save a lot of time and effort in our daily chores.

建議: Kotae no bunpou to hyougen ga fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. 'If I don't lay that I maybe broke' wa 'If I don't read them, I might break the machine' to iu fuu ni shite kudasai. Motto shizen de, tadashii hyougen wo tsukatte kudasai.

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because if I don't, I might not know how to use it properly and could accidentally break it.

建議: Kotae ga bunpou to imi no shizen-sa ni kakawarazu, wakari nikui desu. 'If we do not lead into instructions on the machine is broken' wa 'If we do not read the instructions, the machine might break' to iu fuu ni shite kudasai. 'We cannot like the company it' wa 'we cannot complain to the company' to iu imi desu. Meikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai.

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because if we don't, the machine might break and then we won't be able to complain to the company.

× I like air conditioner because it's extremely hot in Japan so if it's not exist we are maybe die.

✓ I like the air conditioner because it's extremely hot in Japan, so if it didn't exist, we might die.

The phrase 'if it's not exist' is incorrect. The correct form is 'if it didn't exist' using the past tense to express a hypothetical situation. Also, 'we are maybe die' should be 'we might die' to express possibility. Additionally, 'air conditioner' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific machine in the home.

× I like air conditioner because it's extremely hot in Japan so if it's not exist we are maybe die.

✓ I like the air conditioner because it's extremely hot in Japan, so if it didn't exist, we might die.

The adverb 'extremely' is correctly used here, but the sentence structure and verb forms need correction as explained previously.

× Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

✓ Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

No correction needed here; 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines' are correctly pluralized.

× I think washing machines are important. But yeah, I think washing machines and sleeping machines are important because. To use third, we can enough time.

✓ I think washing machines are important. Also, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because using them saves us enough time.

The sentence 'To use third, we can enough time' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It should be rephrased to 'using them saves us enough time' to correctly express the idea. Also, 'sleeping machines' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'sweeping machines.'

× Yes I do, because without that I don't think I don't know how to use a machine also. If I don't lay that I maybe broke.

✓ Yes, I do, because without that, I don't think I would know how to use a machine. Also, if I don't read that, I might break it.

The phrase 'I don't think I don't know' is a double negative and incorrect; it should be 'I don't think I would know.' 'If I don't lay that' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'read.' 'I maybe broke' should be 'I might break it' to express possibility in the future.

× Yes I do, because without that I don't think I don't know how to use a machine also. If I don't lay that I maybe broke.

✓ Yes, I do, because without that, I don't think I would know how to use a machine. Also, if I don't read that, I might break it.

Modal verbs 'would' and 'might' are needed to express hypothetical situations and possibility. The original sentence lacks correct modal verb usage.

× Yes, because if we do not lead into instructions on the machine is broken, we cannot like the company it.

✓ Yes, because if we do not read the instructions and the machine breaks, we cannot complain to the company about it.

The phrase 'lead into instructions' is incorrect; it should be 'read the instructions.' 'On the machine is broken' is ungrammatical; it should be 'and the machine breaks.' 'We cannot like the company it' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'we cannot complain to the company about it.'

× Yes, because if we do not lead into instructions on the machine is broken, we cannot like the company it.

✓ Yes, because if we do not read the instructions and the machine breaks, we cannot complain to the company about it.

The preposition 'into' is incorrectly used after 'lead.' The correct verb is 'read' without a preposition. Also, 'complain to the company about it' uses correct prepositions to express the idea.