机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 文法の誤り（"it save"は"it saves"）を直し、文を簡潔にまとめることが重要です。また、"washing dishes and cooking"は洗濯機の話題と関連が薄いため、不要な情報を省きましょう。

範例: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time, allowing me to focus on studying.

建議: 繰り返し（"I I"）を避け、文法的に正しい文を作ることが必要です。また、"these machines"が何を指すか明確にし、理由をもう少し具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

範例: Yes, I definitely think washing and sweeping machines are important because they save time and reduce the stress of doing household chores manually.

建議: "reading these documents help me"は"helps me"に直し、"instructions"と"documents"の語彙を統一すると自然です。例も具体的で良いですが、もう少し詳しく説明するとさらに良くなります。

範例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely and avoid mistakes.

建議: "these documents"よりも"the instructions"の方が自然です。また、"what to do in emergency"は"what to do in case of an emergency"と表現するとより正確です。

範例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because they provide crucial information on how to handle emergencies and use the machine properly.

× My favorite machine in my home is washing machine because it save me a lot of time and I can focus on studying, washing dishes and cooking.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and I can focus on studying, washing dishes and cooking.

The verb 'save' should be 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'washing machine'. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'washing machine' to specify the machine being talked about.

× Yes I definitely think so because these machines reduce my stress. I I feel stressed out when have to wash my clothes but these machines help me a lot.

✓ Yes, I definitely think so because these machines reduce my stress. I feel stressed out when I have to wash my clothes but these machines help me a lot.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'have to wash my clothes'. Also, there is a repeated 'I' which should be removed. Adding a comma after 'Yes' improves clarity.

× I read instructions before using a machine because reading these documents help me a lot. For example, by reading them I can understand how to use it.

✓ I read instructions before using a machine because reading these documents helps me a lot. For example, by reading them I can understand how to use it.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'reading these documents'.

× My favorite machine in my home is washing machine because it save me a lot of time and I can focus on studying, washing dishes and cooking.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and I can focus on studying, washing dishes and cooking.

The noun 'washing machine' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific machine in the home.