机器— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“air condition”应为“air conditioner”，“motion”应为“machine”。句子结构不够自然，且表达重复。建议使用更准确的词汇，简洁表达观点，并注意时态一致。

範例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it helps me stay cool during the hot summer months. I always turn it on when I am at home to feel comfortable.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“watch war sweeping”不合适，应为“wash or sweep”。句子结构不够连贯，缺少连接词。建议使用正确表达，增加连接词使回答更流畅。

範例: I think washing machines and sweeping machines are essential at home because washing clothes and cleaning by hand take a lot of time. Therefore, using these machines is very convenient and saves me time.

建議: 回答较为自然，但句子稍显重复，且“them”指代不够明确。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because I am not familiar with it. This helps me operate the machine correctly and safely.

建議: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，使用正确的语法和连接词。

範例: Yes, I believe reading instructions is very important because it ensures that we use machines correctly and avoid any damage or accidents.

× I will see the air condition because in the summer the temperature was so high that I can't feel comfortable when I was in at home.

✓ I will choose the air conditioner because in the summer the temperature is so high that I can't feel comfortable when I am at home.

这里时态混用，前半句用将来时，后半句描述习惯或事实应使用一般现在时，且'can't'应与现在时态搭配。建议将描述习惯的部分改为一般现在时。

× I will see the air condition because in the summer the temperature was so high that I can't feel comfortable when I was in at home.

✓ I will choose the air conditioner because in the summer the temperature is so high that I can't feel comfortable when I am at home.

'air condition'应为名词短语'air conditioner'，表示空调设备。

× I will see the air condition because in the summer the temperature was so high that I can't feel comfortable when I was in at home.

✓ I will choose the air conditioner because in the summer the temperature is so high that I can't feel comfortable when I am at home.

'in at home'中'in'和'at'重复使用，正确用法是'at home'。

× So the air condition will be my favorite motion and I always switch on it when I was staying at home.

✓ So the air conditioner will be my favorite machine and I always switch it on when I am staying at home.

'motion'用错，应为'machine'表示机器设备。

× So the air condition will be my favorite motion and I always switch on it when I was staying at home.

✓ So the air conditioner will be my favorite machine and I always switch it on when I am staying at home.

描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时，'was staying'应改为'am staying'。

× So the air condition will be my favorite motion and I always switch on it when I was staying at home.

✓ So the air conditioner will be my favorite machine and I always switch it on when I am staying at home.

'switch on it'中，'switch on'是及物动词短语，宾语应紧跟动词，正确顺序是'switch it on'。

× I think it's an essential part of my home and if we watch war sweeping by hand, it's time consuming.

✓ I think it's an essential part of my home and if we wash or sweep by hand, it's time consuming.

'watch war sweeping'词语错误，应为'wash or sweep'，且动词形式错误。

× I think it's an essential part of my home and if we watch war sweeping by hand, it's time consuming.

✓ I think it's an essential part of my home and if we wash or sweep by hand, it's time consuming.

'by hand'使用正确，但前面动词错误，需改正。

× So it's convenient to use washing machine and sweeping machines to save my time.

✓ So it's convenient to use washing machines and sweeping machines to save my time.

'washing machine'应与'sweeping machines'保持一致，使用复数形式。

× So it's convenient to use washing machine and sweeping machines to save my time.

✓ So it's convenient to use washing machines and sweeping machines to save my time.

'washing machine'单数形式与上下文不符，应改为复数。

× Sure, I often read the instructions before using a machine because I don't really know much about it, so I don't know how to use them.

✓ Sure, I often read the instructions before using a machine because I don't really know much about it, so I don't know how to use it.

'a machine'是单数，后文代词应使用单数'it'，而非复数'them'。

× Reading instructions can help me use them correctly.

✓ Reading instructions can help me use it correctly.

前文指单数机器，代词应为单数'it'。

× I think with the instructions before using a machine, it's a significant part because we should ensure that we use the machine correctly and we should properly make sure that they work on.

✓ I think reading the instructions before using a machine is important because we should ensure that we use the machine correctly and properly make sure that it works.

'with the instructions before using a machine'结构不自然，应改为'reading the instructions before using a machine'；'they work on'表达错误，应为'it works'。